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Jan. 26, 2024

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Chinese Nursery Rhyme

There’s a funny nursery rhyme singing like that:
There’s a vines tree in front of the door of my house. It just sprouts at the spring. A snail carrying his heavy shell is climbing up this tree step by step.
Over the tree there are two small yellow birds who just jeer at this snail, they said,“it’s too early for the vines to bear fruit, what are you climbing for?”
The snail answered: “do not laugh at me, when I arrive at the treetops, the fruit must have ripe.”
As it’s full of childlike fun, many singers have performed in different stages. The most popular performer in this song is Teng Ge E, who is a fork singer with very forceful and resonant voice, make this song more funnier because of the contrary. (In Chinese, we call it 反差萌)

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There’s a funny nursery rhyme singingthat goes like that: is:
There’s a vine
s tree in front of the door of my house.

"Going like this" is the natural way of saying a song or poem sounds like the x you're about to describe

It just sprouts at thein spring.

A snail carrying his heavy shell is climbing up this tree step by step.

Over the tree there are two small yellow birds who just jeer at this snail, they said,saying “it’s too early for the vines to bear fruit, what are you climbing for?”
The snail answer
eds : “do not laugh at me, when I arrive at the treetops, the fruit mustwill have ripe.” ned."
As it’s full of childlike fun, many singers have performed
it in different stagavenues.

Don't change past and present tenses in a text

The most popular performer in this song is Teng Ge E, who is a forlk singer with a very forcepowerful and resonant voice, which make this song more funnier because of the contraryst.

I imagine you meant folk! Although a fork singer would be interesting!

"more funnier" is a double adjective and incorrect, you can just say funnier. It's a mistake a lot of natives make so don't worry

(In Chinese, we call it 反差萌)

Chinese Nursery Rhyme


There’s a funny nursery rhyme singing like that: There’s a vines tree in front of the door of my house.


There’s a funny nursery rhyme singingthat goes like that: is:
There’s a vine
s tree in front of the door of my house.

"Going like this" is the natural way of saying a song or poem sounds like the x you're about to describe

It just sprouts at the spring.


It just sprouts at thein spring.

A snail carrying his heavy shell is climbing up this tree step by step.


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Over the tree there are two small yellow birds who just jeer at this snail, they said,“it’s too early for the vines to bear fruit, what are you climbing for?” The snail answered: “do not laugh at me, when I arrive at the treetops, the fruit must have ripe.” As it’s full of childlike fun, many singers have performed in different stages.


Over the tree there are two small yellow birds who just jeer at this snail, they said,saying “it’s too early for the vines to bear fruit, what are you climbing for?”
The snail answer
eds : “do not laugh at me, when I arrive at the treetops, the fruit mustwill have ripe.” ned."
As it’s full of childlike fun, many singers have performed
it in different stagavenues.

Don't change past and present tenses in a text

The most popular performer in this song is Teng Ge E, who is a fork singer with very forceful and resonant voice, make this song more funnier because of the contrary.


The most popular performer in this song is Teng Ge E, who is a forlk singer with a very forcepowerful and resonant voice, which make this song more funnier because of the contraryst.

I imagine you meant folk! Although a fork singer would be interesting! "more funnier" is a double adjective and incorrect, you can just say funnier. It's a mistake a lot of natives make so don't worry

Chinese n nursery rhyme


(In Chinese, we call it 反差萌)


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Chinese nursery rhyme


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