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SummerTeaWater

April 24, 2022

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Cherry Blossoms In Mountains

The period of cherry blossoms ended up last week in my city

However, I could see the a lot of cherry blossom trees while I was traveling.

In the high altitude mountains, there have still been many wild cherry blossoms.

In the middle of green trees, there were trees in white and pink.

It was quite fabulous, so I tried taking a lot of pictures.

Next year, I will climb up a mountain where will have a lot of cherry blossom trees.

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Cherry Blossoms Inin the Mountains

The period ofor cherry blossoms ended up last week in my cityin my city last week.

However, I could see thesaw a lot of cherry blossom trees while I was traveling.

In the high altitude mountains, there havare still been many wild cherry blossoms.

In the middle of the green trees, there were trees inalso white and pink trees.

It was quite fabulous, so I tried taking a lot of pictures.

Next year, I will climb up a mountain whereich will have a lot of cherry blossom trees.

"Next year, I will climb up a mountain where there will be a lot of cherry blossom trees." would also work.

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SummerTeaWater

April 25, 2022

402

Thank you!

Cherry Blossoms Inin the Mountains

The period ofLast week, cherry blossoms ended up last weekfell in my city.

I am not sure what you are trying to say here

However, I could see thesaw a lot of cherry blossom trees while I was travelling.

In the high altitudes of the mountains, there have still beenare many wild cherry blossoms.

This sentence feels a bit out of place as you have already mentioned that you saw cherry blossom trees. To make it more natural, you could use present tense and say that there are cherry blossoms in the mountains generally.

In the middle of the green trees, there weare trees in white and pink trees.

Same with what I said above

It was quite fabulous, so I tried taking a lot of pictures.

Next year, I will climb up a mountain where there will havbe a lot of cherry blossom trees.

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Good writing, cherry blossom trees are so beautiful :)

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SummerTeaWater

April 25, 2022

402

Thank you very much. Those are so beautiful. :)

Cherry Blossoms In Mountains


Cherry Blossoms Inin the Mountains

Cherry Blossoms Inin the Mountains

The period of cherry blossoms ended up last week in my city


The period ofLast week, cherry blossoms ended up last weekfell in my city.

I am not sure what you are trying to say here

The period ofor cherry blossoms ended up last week in my cityin my city last week.

However, I could see the a lot of cherry blossom trees while I was traveling.


However, I could see thesaw a lot of cherry blossom trees while I was travelling.

However, I could see thesaw a lot of cherry blossom trees while I was traveling.

In the high altitude mountains, there have still been many wild cherry blossoms.


In the high altitudes of the mountains, there have still beenare many wild cherry blossoms.

This sentence feels a bit out of place as you have already mentioned that you saw cherry blossom trees. To make it more natural, you could use present tense and say that there are cherry blossoms in the mountains generally.

In the high altitude mountains, there havare still been many wild cherry blossoms.

In the middle of green trees, there were trees in white and pink.


In the middle of the green trees, there weare trees in white and pink trees.

Same with what I said above

In the middle of the green trees, there were trees inalso white and pink trees.

It was quite fabulous, so I tried taking a lot of pictures.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Next year, I will climb up a mountain where will have a lot of cherry blossom trees.


Next year, I will climb up a mountain where there will havbe a lot of cherry blossom trees.

Next year, I will climb up a mountain whereich will have a lot of cherry blossom trees.

"Next year, I will climb up a mountain where there will be a lot of cherry blossom trees." would also work.

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