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Inesssssss

Jan. 16, 2023

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Chengdu

I will choose a city for travelling around 15 days every year. The longest holiday I can combine in a year. Last year, I chose Chengdu due to the Covid-19. However, Chengdu is not really my top 5 even though it is famous as a tourist city. The most fascinating things in there for me are the panda and Sanxingdui. I was planning to stay there about 5 days and then go to another city. But there are always a saying:" Changes always go beyond plans." At last. I went there twice. The first time for about 15 days, the Second time for about 6 days.
The first thing I like about is the weather as soon as I got out of the plane. It was dry and breeze. Since I live in the South of the China, humid whether is a usual. Though I love my hometown but weather definitely not one of them.
The second thing is the food. Chuanchuanxiang with Green peppercorns must be tried. I can still feel the taste when writing this journal. It took me 10 days to dig out the local delicious food. I ate 4 times a day just in case i didn't miss anything My stomatch was full all the time. I usually have two meals in 'normal' days. As the time went by, I finally remembered the lovely panda and the extinguished Sanxingdui. By the way, Sanxingdui is a distance 5000 to 3000 about ancient Suchuan cultural remains site. The major target of this trip. And of course the panda was super adorable and Sanxingdui was glorious. But the food is what haunted me day and night. Chengdu is bump up to my top 2 now.

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Chengdu

I will choose a city for travelling aroundto visit for 15 days every year.

TIt's the longest holiday I can combine in a year.

Last year, I chose Chengdu due to the Covid-19.

However, ChengduChengdu, however, is not really in my top 5 even though it is famous as a tourist city.

The most fascinating things in there for me are the pandas and Sanxingdui.

I was planning to stay there about 5 days and then go to another city.

But there are always a saying:" There is a saying, however, "Changes always go beyond our plans."

At last.

I wentAt last, I visited there twice.

The first time was for about 15 days, while the Ssecond time was for about 6six days.

The first thing I like about is the weatherd, as soon as I got out off the plane, was the weather.

It was dry and breezey.

Since I live in the South of the China, humid wheather is athe usual.

Though I love my hometown but, weather is definitely not one of themamong the things I like about it.

The second thing iwas the food.

You must try Chuanchuanxiang with Ggreen peppercorns must be tried.

I can still feel the taste whenof it while I writinge this journal.

It took me 10 days to dig outfind the local delicious food.

I ate 4four times a day just in case i diso I wouldn't miss anything . My stomatch was full all the time.

I usually have two meals ion '"normal'" days.

As the time went by, I finally remembered the lovely pandas and the exdistinguished Sanxingdui.

By the way, Sanxingdui is a distance 5000 to 3000 aboutholds the remains of an ancient Suichuan cultural remains site.

I'm not sure what you're trying to say here so this is my best guess.

TIt was the major targetgoal of this trip.

And oOf course the pandas wasere super adorable and Sanxingdui was glorious.

But tThe food, however, is what haunted me day and night.

Chengdu is bumpI bumped Chengdu up to my top 2 now.

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Good work and thank you for the recommendation!

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Inesssssss

Jan. 19, 2023

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Thanksss~~~

I will choose a city for travelling around 15 days every year.

Every year I will choose a city to travel around in for 15 days.

The longest holiday I can combine in a year.

This is the longest holiday I am able to have in a year.

Last year, I chose Chengdu due to the Covid-19.

Last year I chose Chengdu due to the Covid-19 situation.

However, Chengdu is not really my top 5 even though it is famous as a tourist city.

However, Chengdu is not really in my top 5 even though it is famous as a tourist city.

The most fascinating things in there for me are the panda and Sanxingdui.

I was planning to stay there about 5 days and then go to another city.

At last.

I went there twice.

The first time for about 15 days, the Second time for about 6 days.

The first time was for about 15 days and the second time for about 6 days.

It was dry and breeze.

It was dry and breezy.

Since I live in the South of the China, humid whether is a usual.

Since I live in the South of the China, the weather is usually humid.

Though I love my hometown but weather definitely not one of them.

Though I love my hometown the weather is not something I like.

The second thing is the food.

I will choose a city forto travelling around to for 15 days every year.

This is the longest holiday I can combinould have in a year.

Your usage of "combine" is off here. To use combine, maybe you could say "This is the longest holiday I can take in a year if I combine all of my vacation days."

Last year, I chose Chengdu due to the Covid-19.

However, Chengdu is not really in my top 5 even though it is famous as a tourist city.

TFor me, the most fascinating things in there for me are the panda and Sanxingdui.

But there are alwayis a saying:" "Changes always go beyond plans."

I'm not sure that the saying makes sense in English, but maybe it is the literal translation of a quote.

At last.In the end,

The first time I went for about 15 days, and the Ssecond time for about 6 days.

TAs soon as I got off the plane, the first thing I like about isd was that the weather was soon as I got out of the plane.dry and breezy.

It was dry and breeze.

Include in the last sentence.

Since I live in the South of the China, I'm used to humid wheather is a usual.

Though I love my hometown, but weather definitely not one ofthe weather themre.

The second thing iI liked was the food.

You must try the Chuanchuanxiang with Green peppercorns must be tried.!

I can still feel the tastetaste the dish when writing this journal.

It took me 10 days to dig out the localfind all the delicious local food.

I ate 4 times a day just in case i diso that I wouldn't miss tasting anything. My stomatchI was full all the time.

Or, "I ate 4 times a day just in case so that I wouldn't miss anything."

I usually have two meals in 'normal'a days.

As the time went by, I finally remembered the lovely panda and the extinguished Sanxingdui.

By the way, Sanxingdui is a distance 5000 to 3000 aboutkm from the ancient Suchuan cultural remains site.

The major targeSanxingdui was the main point of this trip.

And of course, the panda was super adorable and Sanxingdui was glorious.

Chengdu is bumped up to my top 2 now.

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Sounds like a great visit! This is my first correction on the platform, I hope it helps.

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Inesssssss

Jan. 17, 2023

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Thank you so much.It helped a lot!!!

I willEvery year, I choose a city forto travelling around 15 days every year to and stay there for 15 days.

"choose" instead of "will choose" because you do this routinely

TIt is the longest holiday I can combine in a year.

to make a complete sentence

Last year, I chose Chengdu due to the Covid-19.

However, Chengdu is not really on my top 5 even though it is famous as a tourist city.

"on" because Chengdu is not on your top 5 list of cities you want to travel to

The most fascinating things in there for me are the pandas and Sanxingdui.

I was planning to stay there for about 5 days and then go to another city.

But there are alwayis a saying:" "Changes always go beyond plans."

AIt last.turns out,

I went there twice.

T- the first time for about 15 days, and the Ssecond time for about 6 days.

The first thing I like about Chengdu is the weather as soon as I got out of the plane.

It was dry and breezey.

breeze is a noun, breezy is an adjective

Since I live in the South of theern China, humid wheather is a usual.

TEven though I love my hometown but, weather is definitely not one of themsomething I love about it.

Chuanchuanxiang with Green peppercorns must be triedTrying green peppercorns skewers (chuan chuan xiang) is a must.

(串串香, 對不對?) , I consider skewers a dish, that is why I used "is" instead of "are" (even though there is an "s" in skewers)

I can still feel the tasteremember the exact taste, even when writing this journal.

It took me 10 days to dpig out on all the local delicious food.

the expression is "to pig out on" or "dig into"

I ate 4 times a day just in case i didn'tI missed anything. My stomatch was full all the time.

I usually have two meals ion 'a "normal'" days.

As the time went by, I finally remembered the lovely pandas and the extinguishedct Sanxingdui.

I think you mean to say "extinct", like they don't exist anymore :?

By the way, Sanxingdui is a distance 5000 to 3000 aboutn ancient Suichuan cultural remains site and has a distance of 3000 - 5000 miles.

3000- 5000 miles? or 3000 -5000 years?

The major targeIt was the main point of this trip.

And of course, the pandas wasere super adorable and Sanxingdui was glorious.

ButIt was the food is wthat haunted me day and night.

Chengdu ihas been bumped up toand is now on my top 2 now.

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Great writing, Ines! What a lovely thing to do every year :) Thanks for sharing your experiences in Chengdu.

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Inesssssss

Jan. 17, 2023

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As the time went by, I finally remembered the lovely pandas and the extinguishedct Sanxingdui.

Yep. It didn't exist anymore.

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Inesssssss

Jan. 17, 2023

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By the way, Sanxingdui is a distance 5000 to 3000 aboutn ancient Suichuan cultural remains site and has a distance of 3000 - 5000 miles.

From 15th century BC to 13th century BC?

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Inesssssss

Jan. 17, 2023

1

Chuanchuanxiang with Green peppercorns must be triedTrying green peppercorns skewers (chuan chuan xiang) is a must.

对,就是串串香,hahahahah

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Inesssssss

Jan. 17, 2023

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Thank you so much, Rosie.
Chengdu is definitely worth the visit if you come to China. Highly recomended.^.^

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sunnyrosie

Jan. 17, 2023

1

From 15th century BC to 13th century BC?

啊,了解。Then the sentence can be: By the way, Sanxingdui is an ancient Sichuan cultural remains site that existed from 15th to 13th centuries BC.

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sunnyrosie

Jan. 17, 2023

1

对,就是串串香,hahahahah

(Woops, realized I made a small typo, it’s: green peppercorn skewers. Green peppercorn is an adjective here describing skewers. Usually adjectives aren’t pluralized in this case.

Every year, I will choose a city for travelling around 15 days every year.different city to visit for 15 days

T- the longest holiamount of days I can combinetake as holiday in a year.

Last year, I chose Chengdu due to the Covid-19.

However, Chengdu is not really in my top 5 even though it is famous as a tourist city.

The most fascinating things in there about Chengdu, for me, are the pandas and Sanxingdui.

I was planning to stay there for about 5 days and then go to another city.

But there are always ais a famous saying:" "Changes always go beyond plans."

The first time for about 15 days, the Ssecond time for about 6 days.

The first thing I like about Chengdu is the weather as soon as I got out of the plane.

It was dry and breezey.

Since I live in the Ssouth of the China, humid whether is a usualwhere the weather is typically humid.

Though I love my hometown but, the weather definitelyis not one of themmy favourite things about it.

The second thpoingt is the food.

Chuanchuanxiang with Ggreen peppercorns must be tried.

It took me 10 days to dig outfind theis local delicious food.

I ate 4 times a day just in case i didn't miss anything MI missed something, and my stomatch was full all the time.

By the way, Sanxingdui is a distance 5000 to 3000 about ancient Suichuan cultural remains site.

I'm not sure what you mean by 'a distance 5000 to 3000)

And of course the pandas wasere super adorable and Sanxingdui was glorious.

But the food is what haunted meI continued to dream of day and night.

'Haunted' has a bit of a negative meaning in English, so you could say 'dreamt about' instead, which is more neutral :)

Chengdu is bumped up to my top 2 now.

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I enjoyed reading this and glad you had a fun adventure in Chengdu! I love trying different food when I travel as well :)

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Inesssssss

Jan. 17, 2023

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Thank you for the correcting!
We can be a good team if we traveled together.High five!!

Chengdu


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I will choose a city for travelling around 15 days every year.


Every year, I will choose a city for travelling around 15 days every year.different city to visit for 15 days

I willEvery year, I choose a city forto travelling around 15 days every year to and stay there for 15 days.

"choose" instead of "will choose" because you do this routinely

I will choose a city forto travelling around to for 15 days every year.

I will choose a city for travelling around 15 days every year.

Every year I will choose a city to travel around in for 15 days.

I will choose a city for travelling aroundto visit for 15 days every year.

The longest holiday I can combine in a year.


T- the longest holiamount of days I can combinetake as holiday in a year.

TIt is the longest holiday I can combine in a year.

to make a complete sentence

This is the longest holiday I can combinould have in a year.

Your usage of "combine" is off here. To use combine, maybe you could say "This is the longest holiday I can take in a year if I combine all of my vacation days."

The longest holiday I can combine in a year.

This is the longest holiday I am able to have in a year.

TIt's the longest holiday I can combine in a year.

Last year, I chose Chengdu due to the Covid-19.


Last year, I chose Chengdu due to the Covid-19.

Last year, I chose Chengdu due to the Covid-19.

Last year, I chose Chengdu due to the Covid-19.

Last year, I chose Chengdu due to the Covid-19.

Last year I chose Chengdu due to the Covid-19 situation.

Last year, I chose Chengdu due to the Covid-19.

However, Chengdu is not really my top 5 even though it is famous as a tourist city.


However, Chengdu is not really in my top 5 even though it is famous as a tourist city.

However, Chengdu is not really on my top 5 even though it is famous as a tourist city.

"on" because Chengdu is not on your top 5 list of cities you want to travel to

However, Chengdu is not really in my top 5 even though it is famous as a tourist city.

However, Chengdu is not really my top 5 even though it is famous as a tourist city.

However, Chengdu is not really in my top 5 even though it is famous as a tourist city.

However, ChengduChengdu, however, is not really in my top 5 even though it is famous as a tourist city.

The most fascinating things in there for me are the panda and Sanxingdui.


The most fascinating things in there about Chengdu, for me, are the pandas and Sanxingdui.

The most fascinating things in there for me are the pandas and Sanxingdui.

TFor me, the most fascinating things in there for me are the panda and Sanxingdui.

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The most fascinating things in there for me are the pandas and Sanxingdui.

I was planning to stay there about 5 days and then go to another city.


I was planning to stay there for about 5 days and then go to another city.

I was planning to stay there for about 5 days and then go to another city.

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But there are always a saying:" Changes always go beyond plans."


But there are always ais a famous saying:" "Changes always go beyond plans."

But there are alwayis a saying:" "Changes always go beyond plans."

But there are alwayis a saying:" "Changes always go beyond plans."

I'm not sure that the saying makes sense in English, but maybe it is the literal translation of a quote.

But there are always a saying:" There is a saying, however, "Changes always go beyond our plans."

At last.


AIt last.turns out,

At last.In the end,

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At last.

I went there twice.


I went there twice.

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I wentAt last, I visited there twice.

The first time for about 15 days, the Second time for about 6 days.


The first time for about 15 days, the Ssecond time for about 6 days.

T- the first time for about 15 days, and the Ssecond time for about 6 days.

The first time I went for about 15 days, and the Ssecond time for about 6 days.

The first time for about 15 days, the Second time for about 6 days.

The first time was for about 15 days and the second time for about 6 days.

The first time was for about 15 days, while the Ssecond time was for about 6six days.

The first thing I like about is the weather as soon as I got out of the plane.


The first thing I like about Chengdu is the weather as soon as I got out of the plane.

The first thing I like about Chengdu is the weather as soon as I got out of the plane.

TAs soon as I got off the plane, the first thing I like about isd was that the weather was soon as I got out of the plane.dry and breezy.

The first thing I like about is the weatherd, as soon as I got out off the plane, was the weather.

It was dry and breeze.


It was dry and breezey.

It was dry and breezey.

breeze is a noun, breezy is an adjective

It was dry and breeze.

Include in the last sentence.

It was dry and breeze.

It was dry and breezy.

It was dry and breezey.

Since I live in the South of the China, humid whether is a usual.


Since I live in the Ssouth of the China, humid whether is a usualwhere the weather is typically humid.

Since I live in the South of theern China, humid wheather is a usual.

Since I live in the South of the China, I'm used to humid wheather is a usual.

Since I live in the South of the China, humid whether is a usual.

Since I live in the South of the China, the weather is usually humid.

Since I live in the South of the China, humid wheather is athe usual.

Though I love my hometown but weather definitely not one of them.


Though I love my hometown but, the weather definitelyis not one of themmy favourite things about it.

TEven though I love my hometown but, weather is definitely not one of themsomething I love about it.

Though I love my hometown, but weather definitely not one ofthe weather themre.

Though I love my hometown but weather definitely not one of them.

Though I love my hometown the weather is not something I like.

Though I love my hometown but, weather is definitely not one of themamong the things I like about it.

The second thing is the food.


The second thpoingt is the food.

The second thing iI liked was the food.

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The second thing iwas the food.

Chuanchuanxiang with Green peppercorns must be tried.


Chuanchuanxiang with Ggreen peppercorns must be tried.

Chuanchuanxiang with Green peppercorns must be triedTrying green peppercorns skewers (chuan chuan xiang) is a must.

(串串香, 對不對?) , I consider skewers a dish, that is why I used "is" instead of "are" (even though there is an "s" in skewers)

You must try the Chuanchuanxiang with Green peppercorns must be tried.!

You must try Chuanchuanxiang with Ggreen peppercorns must be tried.

I can still feel the taste when writing this journal.


I can still feel the tasteremember the exact taste, even when writing this journal.

I can still feel the tastetaste the dish when writing this journal.

I can still feel the taste whenof it while I writinge this journal.

It took me 10 days to dig out the local delicious food.


It took me 10 days to dig outfind theis local delicious food.

It took me 10 days to dpig out on all the local delicious food.

the expression is "to pig out on" or "dig into"

It took me 10 days to dig out the localfind all the delicious local food.

It took me 10 days to dig outfind the local delicious food.

I ate 4 times a day just in case i didn't miss anything My stomatch was full all the time.


I ate 4 times a day just in case i didn't miss anything MI missed something, and my stomatch was full all the time.

I ate 4 times a day just in case i didn'tI missed anything. My stomatch was full all the time.

I ate 4 times a day just in case i diso that I wouldn't miss tasting anything. My stomatchI was full all the time.

Or, "I ate 4 times a day just in case so that I wouldn't miss anything."

I ate 4four times a day just in case i diso I wouldn't miss anything . My stomatch was full all the time.

I usually have two meals in 'normal' days.


I usually have two meals ion 'a "normal'" days.

I usually have two meals in 'normal'a days.

I usually have two meals ion '"normal'" days.

As the time went by, I finally remembered the lovely panda and the extinguished Sanxingdui.


As the time went by, I finally remembered the lovely pandas and the extinguishedct Sanxingdui.

I think you mean to say "extinct", like they don't exist anymore :?

As the time went by, I finally remembered the lovely panda and the extinguished Sanxingdui.

As the time went by, I finally remembered the lovely pandas and the exdistinguished Sanxingdui.

By the way, Sanxingdui is a distance 5000 to 3000 about ancient Suchuan cultural remains site.


By the way, Sanxingdui is a distance 5000 to 3000 about ancient Suichuan cultural remains site.

I'm not sure what you mean by 'a distance 5000 to 3000)

By the way, Sanxingdui is a distance 5000 to 3000 aboutn ancient Suichuan cultural remains site and has a distance of 3000 - 5000 miles.

3000- 5000 miles? or 3000 -5000 years?

By the way, Sanxingdui is a distance 5000 to 3000 aboutkm from the ancient Suchuan cultural remains site.

By the way, Sanxingdui is a distance 5000 to 3000 aboutholds the remains of an ancient Suichuan cultural remains site.

I'm not sure what you're trying to say here so this is my best guess.

The major target of this trip.


The major targeIt was the main point of this trip.

The major targeSanxingdui was the main point of this trip.

TIt was the major targetgoal of this trip.

And of course the panda was super adorable and Sanxingdui was glorious.


And of course the pandas wasere super adorable and Sanxingdui was glorious.

And of course, the pandas wasere super adorable and Sanxingdui was glorious.

And of course, the panda was super adorable and Sanxingdui was glorious.

And oOf course the pandas wasere super adorable and Sanxingdui was glorious.

But the food is what haunted me day and night.


But the food is what haunted meI continued to dream of day and night.

'Haunted' has a bit of a negative meaning in English, so you could say 'dreamt about' instead, which is more neutral :)

ButIt was the food is wthat haunted me day and night.

But tThe food, however, is what haunted me day and night.

Chengdu is bump up to my top 2 now.


Chengdu is bumped up to my top 2 now.

Chengdu ihas been bumped up toand is now on my top 2 now.

Chengdu is bumped up to my top 2 now.

Chengdu is bumpI bumped Chengdu up to my top 2 now.

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