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sho

April 24, 2022

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If there is anything wrong or unnatural, can you please correct my sentences?
I'd like to know common and natural phrases! 🙇‍♂️

As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️

B: I'm good.
And you?
A: Hi! It was cool today, so I felt great!
Was it hot there?
B: It was cold here.
A: Great, do you like the cold?
B: No, I like summer better.
A: Really?
Are there a lot of cold days in Colombia?
B: Yeah, we have a lot of cold days.
It's about 14 degrees Celsius on average.
A: I’m so jealous!
I'm thinking about moving to Colombia...🤔
B: Come here.
it rains a lot, though.
A: I don't care about the rain, the important is the temperature!
You don't like the rain?
B: Who likes it?
Do you like the cold so much?
A: I love it!
I really hate summer!
B: Why? 
A: Because I sweat super easily, I get dried out.
Why do you like summer?
B: Summer is more fun!
A: No, it's just the beach, right?
Winter is full of big events.
B: For example?
A: Winter →Halloween, Christmas, New Year's Eve, New Year's, Valentine's Day, etc.
Summer → the beach, that’s it.
B: In Colombia, there are more events in summer!
A: Is it fun?
B: It's a lot of fun!
A: I can enjoy fashion in winter, though !
This is a big thing!
B: Yes, it is!
But I also like summer fashions !
A: True, fashion in summer is good, isn't it?😂
Do you like fashion?
B: I love it!
A: What brands do you like?
B: There's lots of thing!
What about you?
A: Various brands lol
Then, what brands do you wear most often these days?
B: I wear what I like.😂
What's the latest fashion trend in Japan?
A: Korean fashion is popular in Japan.
What about Columbia?

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Chat 2

If there is anything wrong or unnatural, can you please correct my sentences?

I'd like to know common and natural phrases! 🙇‍♂️

As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️

B: I'm good.

And you?

A: Hi!

It was cool today, so I felt great!

Was it hot there?

B: It was cold here.

A: Great, do you like the cold?

B: No, I like summer better.

A: Really?

Are there a lot of cold days in Colombia?

B: Yeah, we have a lot of cold days.

It's about 14 degrees Celsius on average.

A: I’m so jealous!

I'm thinking about moving to Colombia...🤔

B: Come here.

it rains a lot, though.

A: I don't care about the rain, the important is the temperaturetemperature is what is important!

You don't like the rain?

B: Who likes it?

Do you really like the cold so much?

A: I love it!

I really hate summer!

B: Why?

A: Because I sweat super easily, I getit makes me feel like a dried out. fish

Why do you like about summer?

B: Summer is more fun!

A: No, it's just because of the beach, right?

Winter is full of big events.

B: For example?

A: Winter →Halloween, Christmas, New Year's Eve, New Year's, Valentine's Day, etc.

Fun fact: In Japan this is the case - In Australia though all these things happen in Spring or Summer

Summer → the beach, that’s it.

B: In Colombia, there are more events in summer!

A: Is it fun?

B: It's a lot of fun!

A: I can enjoy winter fashion in winter, though !

ThisIt is a big thing!

B: Yes, it is!

But I also like summer fashions !

A: True, fashion in summer is good, isn't it?😂

Do you like fashion?

B: I love it!

A: What brands do you like?

B: There's a lots of thing!

What about you?

A: Various brands lol

Then, what brands do you wear most often these days?

B: I wear what I like.😂

What's the latest fashion trend in Japan?

A: Korean fashion is popular in Japan.

What about in Columbia?

Feedback

Really good job! Your English is improving with everything you write!

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sho

April 26, 2022

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A: Winter →Halloween, Christmas, New Year's Eve, New Year's, Valentine's Day, etc.

How's this as a B line?

It's in Japan this is the case! In Colombia, there are more events in summer!

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sho

April 26, 2022

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A: No, it's just because of the beach, right?

How's this?

B: Summer is more fun!
A: seriously?! It's only the beach, right?
Winter is full of big events.
B: For example?

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harinezumi

April 26, 2022

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How's this as a B line? ↓ It's in Japan this is the case! In Colombia, there are more events in summer!

I would say:
In Japan we have Halloween, Christmas, New Year's Eve, New Year's, Valentine's day etc all in Winter. In Colombia though there are more events in Summer.

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harinezumi

April 26, 2022

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How's this? ↓ B: Summer is more fun! A: seriously?! It's only the beach, right? Winter is full of big events. B: For example?

That would be fine in the context of this conversation :-)

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sho

April 26, 2022

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Thank you so much!!!🙇‍♂️

B: I'm good.

And you?

A: Hi!

It was cool today, so I felt great!

Was it hot there?

B: INo, it was cold here.

Not wrong, but when you're asked "Was it hot there?" it's more natural to reply simply with either:
"No, it was cold." "No, it wasn't" or just "It was cold." Without needing to add the 'here' again.

A: Great, do you like the cold?

B: No, I like summer better.

A: Really?

Are there a lot of cold days in Colombia?

B: Yeah, we have a lot of cold days.

It's about 14 degrees Celsius on average.

A: I’m so jealous!

I'm thinking about moving to Colombia...🤔

B: Come here.

it rains a lot, though.

A: I don't care about the rain, thewhat's important is the temperature!

"the important thing is" or "what's important is"

You don't like the rain?

B: Who likes it?

Do you like the cold so much?

A: I love it!

I really hate summer!

B: Why?

A: Because I sweat super easily, I get dried outehydrated.

I think you mean, "I get dehydrated."

Why do you like summer?

B: Summer is more fun!

A: No, it's just the beach, right?

Winter is full of big events.

B: For example?

A: Winter →Halloween, Christmas, New Year's Eve, New Year's, Valentine's Day, etc.

Summer → the beach, that’s it.

B: In Colombia, there are more events in summer!

A: Is it fun?

B: It's a lot of fun!

A: I can enjoy fashion in winter, though !

B: Yes, it is!

A: True, fashion in summer is good, isn't it?😂

Do you like fashion?

B: I love it!

A: What brands do you like?

B: There's lots of thingem!

What about you?

A: Various brands lol

Then, what brands do you wear most often these days?

B: I wear what I like.😂

What's the latest fashion trend in Japan?

A: Korean fashion is popular in Japan.

What about Coluombia?

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sho

April 24, 2022

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Was it hot there?

Which one is better,"there" or "over there"?

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sho

April 24, 2022

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A: I don't care about the rain, thewhat's important is the temperature!

Which is more natural?

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sho

April 24, 2022

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A: Because I sweat super easily, I get dried outehydrated.

I mean "I dry up like a dead frog."

B: Why?


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If there is anything wrong or unnatural, can you please correct my sentences?


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I'd like to know common and natural phrases! 🙇‍♂️


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As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️


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B: I'm good.


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And you?


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A: Hi!


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It was cool today, so I felt great!


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Was it hot there?


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B: It was cold here.


B: INo, it was cold here.

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A: Great, do you like the cold?


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B: No, I like summer better.


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A: Really?


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It's about 14 degrees Celsius on average.


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A: I’m so jealous!


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I'm thinking about moving to Colombia...🤔


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B: Come here.


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it rains a lot, though.


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A: I don't care about the rain, the important is the temperature!


A: I don't care about the rain, thewhat's important is the temperature!

"the important thing is" or "what's important is"

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You don't like the rain?


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Do you like the cold so much?


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I really hate summer!


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A: Because I sweat super easily, I get dried out.


A: Because I sweat super easily, I get dried outehydrated.

I think you mean, "I get dehydrated."

A: Because I sweat super easily, I getit makes me feel like a dried out. fish

Why do you like summer?


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Why do you like about summer?

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A: No, it's just the beach, right?


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A: No, it's just because of the beach, right?

Winter is full of big events.


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A: Winter →Halloween, Christmas, New Year's Eve, New Year's, Valentine's Day, etc.


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A: Winter →Halloween, Christmas, New Year's Eve, New Year's, Valentine's Day, etc.

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Summer → the beach, that’s it.


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B: In Colombia, there are more events in summer!


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A: I can enjoy fashion in winter, though !


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A: I can enjoy winter fashion in winter, though !

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But I also like summer fashions !


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A: True, fashion in summer is good, isn't it?😂


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Do you like fashion?


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B: I love it!


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A: What brands do you like?


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B: There's lots of thing!


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What about you?


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A: Various brands lol


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Then, what brands do you wear most often these days?


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B: I wear what I like.😂


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What about Columbia?


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