Aug. 3, 2025
My lovely wife is used to waking up and going to bed exactly on schedule. We've been living together for six years and I'm still not used to it. For most of my life I worked until almost the morning and woke up whenever I wanted. I was absolutely happy with that. However, in marriage this sometimes becomes a problem and I'm trying to shift my work hours earlier. So, I planned to work this afternoon. And every time I do that, something goes unpredictable wrong. Today I did everything except the work! A short trip to zoo market turned into a long journey through the mountains to the sea. Now it's night outside. Again :)
Chaotic day
My lovely wife is used to waking up and going to bed exactly on schedule.
We've been living together for six years and I'm still not used to it.
For most of my life I worked until almost the morning and woke up whenever I wanted.
I was absolutely happy with that.
However, in marriage this sometimes becomes a problem in our marriage and I'm trying to shift my work hours earlier.
So, I planned to work this afternoon.
And every time I do that, something goes unpredictabley wrong.
Today I did everything except the work!
A short trip to zoothe market turned into a long journey through the mountains to the sea.
I'm not sure what a "zoo market" is
Now it's night outside.
Again :)
My lovely wife is used to waking up and going to bed exactly on schedulon time.
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For most of my life I worked until almost the morningmorning was about to start and woke up whenever I wanted.
I was absolutely happy with that.
However, inf you're marriaged this sometimes becomes a problem ands I'm trying to shift my work hours earlier.work earlier and earlier in the day.
And every time I do that, something goes unpredictabley wrong.
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Today I did everanything except thelse but work!
A short trip to zoo marketthe zoo turned into a long journey through the mountains to the sea.
Now iIt's night outside.right now.
AgaiSee you soon :)
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its just wording
For most of my life I worked until almost the morningdawn and woke up whenever I wanted.
- until almost the morning sounds a little weird. Changed it to until dawn but there are a variety of ways you could phrase this
However, in marriage this sometimes becomes a problem and now I'm trying to shift my work hours earlier.
adding now just makes it a bit more natural and clear you are trying to change your behavior now
So, I planned to work thisin the afternoon.s
Changed this sentence to match the tense in the following sentence as they don't match
Andbut every time I do that, something goes unpredictable wrong.
Never start a sentence with And, it's not allowed in English
A short trip to zoo marketthe zoo turned into a long journey through the mountains to the sea.
- zoo market doesn't make sense, I presume you mean just a zoo where there are animals
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Now it's night outside.
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