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SummerTeaWater

Aug. 4, 2021

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Changing My Exercise

I really liked hiking, so I used to go to the mountains once a month when I was at 30s.

After getting injured, my backbone has not been good condition.

That's why I don't go to mountains anymore.

Instead, I have been learning swimming for training my back muscles.

I try to go to the swimming pool every day, and it is now my daily routine.

By swimming, I don't need to consider my back pain anymore.

Additionally, I don't get a wet during exercise.

Now I like swimming than hiking.

Swimming is not an exercise, but it is for survival.

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Changing My Exercise

It would be good to specify "Exercise Routine"

I really liked hiking, so I used to go to the mountains once a month when I was atin my 30s.

After getting injured, my backbone has not been in good condition.

That's why I don't go to the mountains anymore.

Instead, I have been learning swimming for training my back muscles.

I try to go to the swimming pool every day, and it is now my daily routine.

By swimming, I don't need to consider my back pain anymore.

Additionally, I don't get a wetsweaty(?) during exercise.

You get wet while swimming, so I think you mean "sweaty".

Now I like swimming more than hiking.

Swimming is not an exercise, but it is for survival.

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SummerTeaWater

Aug. 4, 2021

402

Thank you for your corrections.

Changing My Exercise


Changing My Exercise

It would be good to specify "Exercise Routine"

I really liked hiking, so I used to go to the mountains once a month when I was at 30s.


I really liked hiking, so I used to go to the mountains once a month when I was atin my 30s.

After getting injured, my backbone has not been good condition.


After getting injured, my backbone has not been in good condition.

That's why I don't go to mountains anymore.


That's why I don't go to the mountains anymore.

Instead, I have been learning swimming for training my back muscles.


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I try to go to the swimming pool every day, and it is now my daily routine.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

By swimming, I don't need to consider my back pain anymore.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Additionally, I don't get a wet during exercise.


Additionally, I don't get a wetsweaty(?) during exercise.

You get wet while swimming, so I think you mean "sweaty".

Now I like swimming than hiking.


Now I like swimming more than hiking.

Swimming is not an exercise, but it is for survival.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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