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aybukegul

Aug. 2, 2025

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changing life with social media

The social media is being important for our life day by day.it 's effect that do things all area in our life.For example, ın a relationship change over time with social media.
I think, the social media is not good for relationship of people.Actually, people are closer that isn't social media in the world.When there is not social media in the our life, people was meet on face to face and was improvement relationship.There was a real friendship old times but there is lots of fake friend now

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The sSocial media is becoming important forin our lifeves day by day.i It 's eaffected that do thingsings we do in all area ins of our life. For example, ın a relationships change over time with social media.

I think, theat social media is not good for relationship ofs with people. Actually, people are closer that isn't in social media are closer in the real world.W However, when there is not social media in the our life, people wasare able to meet on face to face and there was improvement in relationship.s. There was aere real friendship old times s back then but there isare lots of fake friends now

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Good job, I think it's mostly about remembering past-tense and keeping in mind of structure. But I understand how you feel! Ever since the pandemic, a lot of people has resorted to social media (online) it's tough!

cChanging lLife wWith sSocial mMedia

Title capitalization rules

The sSocial media is being important for our life day by day.it 's effect that do thingsdaily lives. Its effect is found in all areas in our life.ves. For example, ın a relationships change over time with social media.

There's no "the" when referring to social media.

It's = it is
Its = possessive form of it

I think, the social media is not good for relationship of people.s. Actually, people are closer that isn'without social media in the world. When there iwas not social media in the our lifeves, people was meet onmet face -to -face and wasit improvementd relationship.s. There was a real friendship in older times , but there isare lots of fake friends now.

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Great job.

changing life with social media


cChanging lLife wWith sSocial mMedia

Title capitalization rules

The social media is being important for our life day by day.it 's effect that do things all area in our life.For example, ın a relationship change over time with social media.


The sSocial media is being important for our life day by day.it 's effect that do thingsdaily lives. Its effect is found in all areas in our life.ves. For example, ın a relationships change over time with social media.

There's no "the" when referring to social media. It's = it is Its = possessive form of it

The sSocial media is becoming important forin our lifeves day by day.i It 's eaffected that do thingsings we do in all area ins of our life. For example, ın a relationships change over time with social media.

I think, the social media is not good for relationship of people.Actually, people are closer that isn't social media in the world.When there is not social media in the our life, people was meet on face to face and was improvement relationship.There was a real friendship old times but there is lots of fake friend now


I think, the social media is not good for relationship of people.s. Actually, people are closer that isn'without social media in the world. When there iwas not social media in the our lifeves, people was meet onmet face -to -face and wasit improvementd relationship.s. There was a real friendship in older times , but there isare lots of fake friends now.

I think, theat social media is not good for relationship ofs with people. Actually, people are closer that isn't in social media are closer in the real world.W However, when there is not social media in the our life, people wasare able to meet on face to face and there was improvement in relationship.s. There was aere real friendship old times s back then but there isare lots of fake friends now

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