June 19, 2021
Changed Activities for Free TIme
In my free time, I used to practice an oboe which is a kind of woodwind instrument.
My company has an orchestra room where has many practice rooms, so I usually went there to play it.
Because of the Covid-19, the rooms have been blocked and no one can go there.
For releasing my stress in my free time, I tried to make other habits.
Firstly, I am reading e-books with my phone in my free time.
Because e-books are more convenient than paper books, so I can read them anywhere and anytime.
Secondly, I am practicing to learn English more.
Around the time last year, my goal to study English is to get a higher score for special tests.
So it was really boring and I felt sad when I couldn't speak foreigners in English.
These days, I enjoy interest after increasing my abilities.
I can read English written books more easily and I can see YouTube videos in English.
In the end, I still have fun with new habits even in the Covid-19.
Changed Activities for Free TIme
I'd probably say, "I changed what I do in my free time"
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Articles for oboe: specifying that it is a type of woodwind instrument, implying that there are others, and that you mean this specific one is the reason why, in my opinion
Word correction for type. It just sounds more natural to my ears.
My company has an orchestra room, whereich has many practice rooms, so I usually went there to play it.
comma, and changed where to which.
You could use 'where' like this:
"My company has an orchestra room, where there are many practice rooms, so I usually went there to play it."
In this case, I'd probably use 'several' in place of many.
Because of the Covid-19, the rooms have been blocked and no one can go there.
article - removed 'the'
While the rest is correct, it might be better to say, "the rooms have been locked and no one can use them."
ForTo releasing myieve stress in my free time, I tried to make other habits.
To relieve stress/In order to relieve stress/To let go of stress are also good alternatives. You can still use 'release', though.
Firstly, I am reading e-books with my phone in my free time.
tense, unfortunately I don't know enough to give specific advice, but you seem to know what you're doing for the most part.
Because eE-books are more convenient than paper books, sobecause I can read them anywhere and anytime.
Secondly, I am practicing to learn English more.
Either
I'm practicing in order to learn English better
Or
I'm practicing English more often
Or
I'm learning English more often
Or
I'm learning more English
All of these do have different meanings, so I'll leave this one as is.
Around theis time last year, my goal was to study English isn order to get a higher score for special tests.
'to get' works, but 'in order to get' is better
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So it was really boring and I felt sad when I couldn't speak foreigners in English.
These days, I enjomy interest after increasing my abilitieshas returned as my abilities have improved.
I can read English written books in English more easily and I can seewatch YouTube videos in English.
word choice, word order
In the end, I am still haveing fun with new habits even in theduring Covid-19.
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June 19, 2021
Thank you very much
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Changed Activities for Free TIme Changed Activities for Free TIme I'd probably say, "I changed what I do in my free time" |
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In my free time, I used to practice an oboe which is a kind of woodwind instrument. In my free time, I used to practice Articles for oboe: specifying that it is a type of woodwind instrument, implying that there are others, and that you mean this specific one is the reason why, in my opinion Word correction for type. It just sounds more natural to my ears. |
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My company has an orchestra room where has many practice rooms, so I usually went there to play it. My company has an orchestra room, wh comma, and changed where to which. You could use 'where' like this: "My company has an orchestra room, where there are many practice rooms, so I usually went there to play it." In this case, I'd probably use 'several' in place of many. |
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Because of the Covid-19, the rooms have been blocked and no one can go there. Because of article - removed 'the' While the rest is correct, it might be better to say, "the rooms have been locked and no one can use them." |
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For releasing my stress in my free time, I tried to make other habits.
To relieve stress/In order to relieve stress/To let go of stress are also good alternatives. You can still use 'release', though. |
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Firstly, I am reading e-books with my phone in my free time. First tense, unfortunately I don't know enough to give specific advice, but you seem to know what you're doing for the most part. |
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Because e-books are more convenient than paper books, so I can read them anywhere and anytime.
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Secondly, I am practicing to learn English more. Second Either I'm practicing in order to learn English better Or I'm practicing English more often Or I'm learning English more often Or I'm learning more English All of these do have different meanings, so I'll leave this one as is. |
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Around the time last year, my goal to study English is to get a higher score for special tests. Around th 'to get' works, but 'in order to get' is better also, tense |
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So it was really boring and I felt sad when I couldn't speak foreigners in English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These days, I enjoy interest after increasing my abilities. These days, |
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I can read English written books more easily and I can see YouTube videos in English. I can read word choice, word order |
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In the end, I still have fun with new habits even in the Covid-19. In the end, I am still hav |
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