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alexwong2164

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Weather change, habit change

Now the weather getting warmer each day.

Soon summer will be arrive.

Before the summer and spring is raining season.

So far I can riding bicycle every day comfortably.

Don’t think I can do that next month.

In summer time riding bicycle is torment.

In fact, in summer just walking outside can suffer you to dead.

The only sport I can do is swimming.

Or anything not outdoor.

Is there a place on earth with only one season?

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WAs weather changes, habit changeso do habits.

Now the weather is getting warmer eachday by day.

Soon summer will be arrive.

Before the summer and spring is the rainingy season.

Do you mean 'between the summer and spring'?

So far I can ridinge bicycle every day comfortably.

Don’t think I can'll be able to do that next month.

In summer time riding bicycle is a torment.

In fact, in summer just walking outside can sufferburn you to deadth.

The only sport I can do is swimming.

Or anything that is not outdoors.

Is there a place on earth with only one season?

cChange

Weather changes, habits change

Now the weather getting warmer each day.

Soon summer will be arrive.

Before the summer and spring ist is the rainingy season.

So far I can ridingAt the moment, I can comfortably ride my bicycle every day comfortably.

Don’t think I can do that next month.

In the summer time riding a bicycle is a torment.

In fact, in summer just walking outside can suffer you to deamake you feel very tired.

You can also say - feel half dead if you walk outside

The only sport I canould do is swimming.

Or anything that is not outdoor.s.

Is there a place on earth with only one season?

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cChange

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WAs weather changes, habits change.

Now the weather is getting warmer each day.

Soon summer will be arrive.

Before the summer and spring is the rainingy season.

So far I can ridinge a bicycle every day comfortably.

DI don’t think I canwill be able to do that next month.

In summer time riding a bicycle is torment.

In fact, in summer just walking outside can suffer you to deadkill you.

I'm not sure if this is what you meant here?

The only sport I can do is swimming, or anything not outdoors.

I merged your sentences as usually it's better not to start a sentence with 'or'.

Or anything not outdoor.

Is there a place on earth with only one season?

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Good job! I don't like too much heat either, hope you enjoy being outside before it gets too hot

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Capital letters are used in a title

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Weather change, habit change


WAs weather changes, habits change.

Weather changes, habits change

WAs weather changes, habit changeso do habits.

Now the weather getting warmer each day.


Now the weather is getting warmer each day.

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Now the weather is getting warmer eachday by day.

Soon summer will be arrive.


Soon summer will be arrive.

Soon summer will be arrive.

Soon summer will be arrive.

Before the summer and spring is raining season.


Before the summer and spring is the rainingy season.

Before the summer and spring ist is the rainingy season.

Before the summer and spring is the rainingy season.

Do you mean 'between the summer and spring'?

So far I can riding bicycle every day comfortably.


So far I can ridinge a bicycle every day comfortably.

So far I can ridingAt the moment, I can comfortably ride my bicycle every day comfortably.

So far I can ridinge bicycle every day comfortably.

Don’t think I can do that next month.


DI don’t think I canwill be able to do that next month.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Don’t think I can'll be able to do that next month.

In summer time riding bicycle is torment.


In summer time riding a bicycle is torment.

In the summer time riding a bicycle is a torment.

In summer time riding bicycle is a torment.

In fact, in summer just walking outside can suffer you to dead.


In fact, in summer just walking outside can suffer you to deadkill you.

I'm not sure if this is what you meant here?

In fact, in summer just walking outside can suffer you to deamake you feel very tired.

You can also say - feel half dead if you walk outside

In fact, in summer just walking outside can sufferburn you to deadth.

The only sport I can do is swimming.


The only sport I can do is swimming, or anything not outdoors.

I merged your sentences as usually it's better not to start a sentence with 'or'.

The only sport I canould do is swimming.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Or anything not outdoor.


Or anything not outdoor.

Or anything that is not outdoor.s.

Or anything that is not outdoors.

Is there a place on earth with only one season?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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