Challenge, day 05

Remember to leave a spacing after punctuation.

I also want to thank someoneyou for helping and correcting me.

Also is not needed in this case.

After I came back at home, I prepared the lunch.

I continue tod listening to a part of the book " Diary kid of wimpy" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it out loud.

I was so happy to understand of this ae part I am reading.

I feel so good I did not feel no pain/happy, it was not a painful process.

Confusing usage of pain here. What is painful here? Learning English?

TMany thanks to God!

I made a promise to a poor woman to help her, therefore,. So tomorrow I will drop off her ato a doctor; s. ¶
She is ill and I am going towill pay athe doctor and buy her medeicine on her behalf.

Use more punctuation in English.

Challenge,d Day 05

I also want to thank someone forthe person (or people) who helping ed and correctinged me.

When you say someone, it sounds like you're going to go on the street and thank someone, anyone, for helping you, even if they're not the same person who helped you.

After I came back at home, I prepared the lunch.

Then, I started to study three English lessons and two Spanish lessons..

I continued to listen to a part of the book " Diary kid of wa Wimpy Kid" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it out loud.

I was so happy to understand of this a partpart of the book.

I feel so good I did not feel noany pain.

This sounds like you felt physical pain in your body, and your pain was healed by understanding the book. I think you mean to say you felt better about your life or something like that.

Thanks to God!

I made a promise to a poor woman to help her, therefore,so tomorrow I will drop off her to aat the doctor; s. She is ill and I am going to pay athe doctor and buy her medeicine.

"Therefore" is too formal for this essay.