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courageuse19

Oct. 3, 2022

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Challenge03

First of all, I am not good at English. I also want to thank you for helping and correcting me.

Today is third day of my English challenge and Spanish.
Today, I studied one lesson and one lesson in Spanish. Then, I sent en email to a friend. I told him what I did yesterday in my daily routine.
Afternoon, I spoke to a friend in Skype over and I suggested her a bunch of ideas, because she needs to support her until if just a word.
Before a few mintes agos,or before I am going to bed, I was reviewing bunch of words in Spanish.
I should not stay on the chair for long hours because I sick;I have cervical hernia.

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Challenge 03 or: Challenge, Day 3

First of all, I am not good at English.

I also want to thank you for helping and correcting me.

Today is the third day of my English challenge and Spanish. challenge.

Today, I studied one English lesson and one lesson in Spanish.

Then, I sent en email to a friend.

I told him what I did yesterday in my daily routine.

After noon (or: In the afternoon), I spoke to a friend inover Skype over and I suggested her a bunch of ideas to her, because she needsed someone to support her until if just a, even with just a kind word.

BeforeUntil a few minutes agos, or before I am going to bed, I was reviewing a bunch of words in Spanish.

Until a few minutes ago, or before going to bed, I was reviewing a bunch of words in Spanish.

I should not sitay on the chair for long (or: for many hours) because I sick;am injured; I have a cervical hernia.

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courageuse19

Oct. 5, 2022

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After noon (or: In the afternoon), I spoke to a friend inover Skype over and I suggested her a bunch of ideas to her, because she needsed someone to support her until if just a, even with just a kind word.

Hi! My friend is going through a problem at work, therefore, when I met her over Skype. I give a buch of ideas to her, because( she needs to support her until if just a word).

In the last part, I mean We can help or support someone, even with a kind word.

Thank you for you.

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courageuse19

Oct. 5, 2022

2

Thank you for correcting me.

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JoeTofu

Oct. 5, 2022

1

Hi! My friend is going through a problem at work, therefore, when I met her over Skype. I give a buch of ideas to her, because( she needs to support her until if just a word). In the last part, I mean We can help or support someone, even with a kind word. Thank you for you.

You’re welcome!

Then you could say, “…because she needed someone to support her, even with just a kind word.”

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courageuse19

Oct. 5, 2022

2

Thank and thank you so much.

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courageuse19

Oct. 5, 2022

2

You’re welcome! Then you could say, “…because she needed someone to support her, even with just a kind word.”

Thank and thank you so much. You helped me a lot!

Challenge03


Challenge 03 or: Challenge, Day 3

First of all, I am not good at English.


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I also want to thank you for helping and correcting me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today is third day of my English challenge and Spanish.


Today is the third day of my English challenge and Spanish. challenge.

Today, I studied one lesson and one lesson in Spanish.


Today, I studied one English lesson and one lesson in Spanish.

Then, I sent en email to a friend.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I told him what I did yesterday in my daily routine.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Afternoon, I spoke to a friend in Skype over and I suggested her a bunch of ideas, because she needs to support her until if just a word.


After noon (or: In the afternoon), I spoke to a friend inover Skype over and I suggested her a bunch of ideas to her, because she needsed someone to support her until if just a, even with just a kind word.

Before a few mintes agos,or before I am going to bed, I was reviewing bunch of words in Spanish.


BeforeUntil a few minutes agos, or before I am going to bed, I was reviewing a bunch of words in Spanish.

Until a few minutes ago, or before going to bed, I was reviewing a bunch of words in Spanish.

I should not stay on the chair for long hours because I sick;I have cervical hernia.


I should not sitay on the chair for long (or: for many hours) because I sick;am injured; I have a cervical hernia.

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