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courageuse19

April 18, 2023

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Challenge Writing, Day 199

Today is day 199 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I listened a video in Arabic so I wanted to translat to English.

I am not a good a teacher or a good person that will tell you that everything will be okay. No, it will be right when you make it good because your life is in your hands. No body coming to save. Not mother, not husband, not children, no body doing it. You want to change your life? You have to to change.

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Challenge Writing, Day 199

Today is day 199 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I listenwatched a video in Arabic so I wanted to translat e it into English.

We "watch" videos and "listen" to music.

"To translate into" is the phrase we use.

I am not a good a teacher or a good person thatwho will tell you that everything will be okay.

No, it will be alright when you make it goodright because your life is in your hands.

No body is coming to save you.

Not your mother, notr your husband, notr your children, no body doing itwill do it (for you).

You want to change your life?

You have to to change it.

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Wow, what a good video! You translated it well. Nice work!

Today I listened to a video in Arabic sowhich I wanted to translat e into English.

I am not a good a teacher or a good person that will tell you that everything will be okay.

No, it will be right when's up to you to make it goodthings right, because your life is in your hands.

No body is coming to save you.

Not your mother, not your husband, not your children, no body doing it.

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courageuse19

April 18, 2023

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Thank you.

Challenge Writing, Day 199


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Today is day 199 of my daily English writing challenge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I listened a video in Arabic so I wanted to translat to English.


Today I listened to a video in Arabic sowhich I wanted to translat e into English.

Today I listenwatched a video in Arabic so I wanted to translat e it into English.

We "watch" videos and "listen" to music. "To translate into" is the phrase we use.

I am not a good a teacher or a good person that will tell you that everything will be okay.


I am not a good a teacher or a good person that will tell you that everything will be okay.

I am not a good a teacher or a good person thatwho will tell you that everything will be okay.

No, it will be right when you make it good because your life is in your hands.


No, it will be right when's up to you to make it goodthings right, because your life is in your hands.

No, it will be alright when you make it goodright because your life is in your hands.

No body coming to save.


No body is coming to save you.

No body is coming to save you.

Not mother, not husband, not children, no body doing it.


Not your mother, not your husband, not your children, no body doing it.

Not your mother, notr your husband, notr your children, no body doing itwill do it (for you).

You want to change your life?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You have to to change.


You have to to change it.

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