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courageuse19

Dec. 8, 2022

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Challenge, Day 68

Today is the 68th day of my daily English challenge. At noon, my sister and I went out by her car, and she had listened a song by Céline Dion in French is ' Je voudrais parlais à mon père.' I think in English it means ' I'd like to talk to my father' to honor our father. It's a strong words and a song.

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(English/Language/LangCorrect) Challenge, Day 68

Challenge sounds vague on its own.

Today is the 68th day of my daily English challenge.

At noon, my sister and I went out by her car, and she had listened to a song by Céline Dion in French is ' , "Je voudrais parlais à mon père.'"

If you listened to the song at the same time you would say "...we listened to a song..."
If you drove somewhere you would say "...my sister and I went for a drive in her car..."

I think in English it means ' "I'd like to talk to my father'". (We listened to it) to honor our father.

This seems like two separate ideas. You might also have meant that Céline Dion wrote the song to honor her father.

It's ahas strong wordlyrics and ais a good song.

The words of a song are called lyrics.

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courageuse19

Dec. 8, 2022

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(English/Language/LangCorrect) Challenge, Day 68

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Dec. 11, 2022

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Thank your for your supporting me. Do you want to write the title, English language/ langcorrect challenge, Day 68 I'm not sure understand.

I would add one more word to make the title sound better. Any of these would work:

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Challenge, Day 68


(English/Language/LangCorrect) Challenge, Day 68

Challenge sounds vague on its own.

Today is the 68th day of my daily English challenge.


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At noon, my sister and I went out by her car, and she had listened a song by Céline Dion in French is ' Je voudrais parlais à mon père.'


At noon, my sister and I went out by her car, and she had listened to a song by Céline Dion in French is ' , "Je voudrais parlais à mon père.'"

If you listened to the song at the same time you would say "...we listened to a song..." If you drove somewhere you would say "...my sister and I went for a drive in her car..."

I think in English it means ' I'd like to talk to my father' to honor our father.


I think in English it means ' "I'd like to talk to my father'". (We listened to it) to honor our father.

This seems like two separate ideas. You might also have meant that Céline Dion wrote the song to honor her father.

It's a strong words and a song.


It's ahas strong wordlyrics and ais a good song.

The words of a song are called lyrics.

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