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courageuse19

Nov. 23, 2022

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Challenge, Day 53

Today is the 53th day of my daily English challenge. Today I woke up with a strong pain on the left side because I have cervical hernia.

I went out for shopping. After came back home, I prepared the diner because I was fasting. In the afternoon, I was talking to friend over Skype but I didn't because I am in pain and it's hurts a lot. When I felt a little better I had read a text a loud.

Before sleeping, I go to wear my pyjamas, then pray.

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Challenge, Day 53

Today is the 53thrd day of my daily English challenge.

First, second, thi*rd* is where 53rd comes from.

Today I woke up with a strong pain on the left side because I have cervical hernia.

I went out for shopping anyway.

After I came back home, I prepared the dinner because I was fastingafter I had fasted for the day.

In the afternoon, I was talking tomet a friend over Skype but I didn't talk a lot because I amwas in pain and it's hurts a lot.

When I felt a little better, I had read a text a loud.

Before sleeping, I go to wearput on my pyajamas, and then prayed.

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Nicely done. I hope you feel better soon.

Today I woke up with a strong pain on themy left side because I have cervical hernia.

After I came back home, I prepared the dinner because I was fasting.

In the afternoon, I was talking to my friend over Skype but I didn'thad to stop because I amwas in pain and it's hurts a loted too much. ¶

In the afternoon, I wanted to talk to my friend over Skype but I didn't because I was in pain and it hurted too much
.

Were you talking to your friend and then quit from the pain or did you never done it at all because of the pain?

When I felt a little better I had read a text aout loud.

Before going to sleeping, I go to wearwore my pyjamas, then prayed.

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courageuse19

Nov. 24, 2022

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In the afternoon, I was talking to my friend over Skype but I didn'thad to stop because I amwas in pain and it's hurts a loted too much. ¶

In the afternoon, I wanted to talk to my friend over Skype but I didn't because I was in pain and it hurted too much
.

Thank you very much and thank you for your question

I didn't talk to a friend over Skype.

I went out for shopping.


I went out for shopping anyway.

Challenge, Day 53


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Today is the 53th day of my daily English challenge.


Today is the 53thrd day of my daily English challenge.

First, second, thi*rd* is where 53rd comes from.

Today I woke up with a strong pain on the left side because I have cervical hernia.


Today I woke up with a strong pain on themy left side because I have cervical hernia.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After came back home, I prepared the diner because I was fasting.


After I came back home, I prepared the dinner because I was fasting.

After I came back home, I prepared the dinner because I was fastingafter I had fasted for the day.

In the afternoon, I was talking to friend over Skype but I didn't because I am in pain and it's hurts a lot.


In the afternoon, I was talking to my friend over Skype but I didn'thad to stop because I amwas in pain and it's hurts a loted too much. ¶

In the afternoon, I wanted to talk to my friend over Skype but I didn't because I was in pain and it hurted too much
.

Were you talking to your friend and then quit from the pain or did you never done it at all because of the pain?

In the afternoon, I was talking tomet a friend over Skype but I didn't talk a lot because I amwas in pain and it's hurts a lot.

When I felt a little better I had read a text a loud.


When I felt a little better I had read a text aout loud.

When I felt a little better, I had read a text a loud.

Before sleeping, I go to wear my pyjamas, then pray.


Before going to sleeping, I go to wearwore my pyjamas, then prayed.

Before sleeping, I go to wearput on my pyajamas, and then prayed.

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