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courageuse19

Oct. 31, 2022

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Challenge, Day 31

Today is day of 31 of my daily English challenge. I read through the corrections I got yestedrady. I am so happy to understand them and the advice that came with them.

In this morning, I went out to the groceries. I bought two chicken thighs and cheese.When I came back, I cooked cutlet stufed with cheese in the oven. It was delicous! I love cooking!

In the afternoon, I was communicating to a friend on Skype but I canceld it. Because I am still in a pain; I have cervical herniated disc.

I listened a video on Youtube in English without read the translater. My aim has always been to be a good listener and to get used to hearning English.

I am grateful for this webesite and everyone who has helped me.

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Today is day of 31 of my daily English challenge.

I read through the corrections I got yestedradrday.

I am so happy to understand them and the advice that came with themir advice.

The advice seems to be the important part of the corrections, so I cut down on some redundant words

In this morning, I went out to thebuy groceries.

I bought two chicken thighs and cheese. When I came back, I cooked cutlet stuffed with cheese in the oven.

It was delicious!

I would suggest that you use spellcheck when you're writing. Google docs gives you spelling suggestions for free. This way you can avoid errors like spelling "stuffed" with one f or "delicious" as "delicous"

In the afternoon, I was communicating to a friend on Skype but I canceld i was planning on talking with a friend on Skype this afternoon, but I ended up cancelling that.

Because I am still in a pain; I have because of my cervical herniated disc.

I listenwatched a video on Youtube in English without reading the translaterd captions.

My aimgoal has always been to be a goodimprove at listenering and to get used to hearnunderstanding English.

I am grateful for this webesite and everyone who has helped me.

Today is day of 31 of my daily English challenge.

I read through the corrections I got yestedradrday.

I am so happy toI understand them and the advice that came with them.

In tThis morning, I went out to thefor groceries.

Either "I went out for groceries" or "I went out to the grocery store" would work here.

I bought two chicken thighs and cheese. When I came back, I cooked cutlet stuffed with cheese in the oven.

It was delicious!

I love cooking!

In the afternoon, I was going to communicating toe with a friend on Skype but I cancelled it.

If you were already communicating with a friend, you could say "I was communicating with a friend on Skype but I had to end it early."

Because I am still in a pain; because I have cervical herniated disc.

I listened to a video on Youtube in English without reading the translaterions.

My aim has always been to be a good listener and to get used to hearning English.

I am grateful for this webesite and everyone who has helped me.

Feedback

Great job!

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courageuse19

Nov. 1, 2022

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In the afternoon, I was going to communicating toe with a friend on Skype but I cancelled it.

No, I didn't call to a friend; I cancelled our appointment; becuase I am still in pain.

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mh930

Nov. 1, 2022

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No, I didn't call to a friend; I cancelled our appointment; becuase I am still in pain.

Ah okay, then I would say "I was going to communicate with a friend on Skype, but I had to cancel."

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courageuse19

Nov. 1, 2022

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Ah okay, then I would say "I was going to communicate with a friend on Skype, but I had to cancel."

Thank you very much.

Today is day of 31 of my daily English challenge.

I read through the corrections I got yestedradrday.

I am so happy tohat I understand them corrections and the advice that came with themwas given.

In this morning, I went out to get the groceries.

Two options: I went to go to the shops.
I went out to get the groceries.

I bought two chicken thighs and a block of cheese.When I came back, I coobaked the chickedn cutlet stuffed with cheese in the oven.

It was delicious!

In the afternoon, I was communicattalking to a friend on Skype but I had to canceld it.

Because I am still in a pain; because I have a cervical herniated disc.

Try not to start a sentence with because. It is a word that connects two ideas that form one sentence.

I listened to a video on Youtube in English without reading the translater.subtitles.

My aim has always been to be a good listener and to get used to hearning English.

I am grateful for this webesite and everyone who has helped me.

Feedback

This is good progress!! Watch out for your use if connecting words like because, but and as. Use these words in the middle of a sentence 👍👍

In thise morning, I went out to the groceries.

"This morning" is also fine

I bought two chicken thighs and cheese. When I came back, I cooked cutlet stuffed with cheese in the oven.

In the afternoon, I was communicating to a friend on Skype but I cancelled it.

Because I am still in a pain;: I have a cervical herniated disc.

I listened to a video on Youtube in English without reading the translaterion.

My aim has always been to be a good listener and to get used to hearning English.

Feedback

good work, easy to understand, minor corrections

Challenge, Day 31


Today is day of 31 of my daily English challenge.


Today is day of 31 of my daily English challenge.

Today is day of 31 of my daily English challenge.

Today is day of 31 of my daily English challenge.

I read through the corrections I got yestedrady.


I read through the corrections I got yestedradrday.

I read through the corrections I got yestedradrday.

I read through the corrections I got yestedradrday.

I am so happy to understand them and the advice that came with them.


I am so happy tohat I understand them corrections and the advice that came with themwas given.

I am so happy toI understand them and the advice that came with them.

I am so happy to understand them and the advice that came with themir advice.

The advice seems to be the important part of the corrections, so I cut down on some redundant words

In this morning, I went out to the groceries.


In thise morning, I went out to the groceries.

"This morning" is also fine

In this morning, I went out to get the groceries.

Two options: I went to go to the shops. I went out to get the groceries.

In tThis morning, I went out to thefor groceries.

Either "I went out for groceries" or "I went out to the grocery store" would work here.

In this morning, I went out to thebuy groceries.

I bought two chicken thighs and cheese.When I came back, I cooked cutlet stufed with cheese in the oven.


I bought two chicken thighs and cheese. When I came back, I cooked cutlet stuffed with cheese in the oven.

I bought two chicken thighs and a block of cheese.When I came back, I coobaked the chickedn cutlet stuffed with cheese in the oven.

I bought two chicken thighs and cheese. When I came back, I cooked cutlet stuffed with cheese in the oven.

I bought two chicken thighs and cheese. When I came back, I cooked cutlet stuffed with cheese in the oven.

It was delicous!


It was delicious!

It was delicious!

It was delicious!

I would suggest that you use spellcheck when you're writing. Google docs gives you spelling suggestions for free. This way you can avoid errors like spelling "stuffed" with one f or "delicious" as "delicous"

I love cooking!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the afternoon, I was communicating to a friend on Skype but I canceld it.


In the afternoon, I was communicating to a friend on Skype but I cancelled it.

In the afternoon, I was communicattalking to a friend on Skype but I had to canceld it.

In the afternoon, I was going to communicating toe with a friend on Skype but I cancelled it.

If you were already communicating with a friend, you could say "I was communicating with a friend on Skype but I had to end it early."

In the afternoon, I was communicating to a friend on Skype but I canceld i was planning on talking with a friend on Skype this afternoon, but I ended up cancelling that.

Because I am still in a pain; I have cervical herniated disc.


Because I am still in a pain;: I have a cervical herniated disc.

Because I am still in a pain; because I have a cervical herniated disc.

Try not to start a sentence with because. It is a word that connects two ideas that form one sentence.

Because I am still in a pain; because I have cervical herniated disc.

Because I am still in a pain; I have because of my cervical herniated disc.

I listened a video on Youtube in English without read the translater.


I listened to a video on Youtube in English without reading the translaterion.

I listened to a video on Youtube in English without reading the translater.subtitles.

I listened to a video on Youtube in English without reading the translaterions.

I listenwatched a video on Youtube in English without reading the translaterd captions.

My aim has always been to be a good listener and to get used to hearning English.


My aim has always been to be a good listener and to get used to hearning English.

My aim has always been to be a good listener and to get used to hearning English.

My aim has always been to be a good listener and to get used to hearning English.

My aimgoal has always been to be a goodimprove at listenering and to get used to hearnunderstanding English.

I am grateful for this webesite and everyone who has helped me.


I am grateful for this webesite and everyone who has helped me.

I am grateful for this webesite and everyone who has helped me.

I am grateful for this webesite and everyone who has helped me.

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