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You're following sentence indicates that you received multiple corrections, so you'd want to use the plural form here.

I undrerstand your corrections and advice.

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I separated this into two sentences in an attempt to achieve a more natural flow.

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I'm assuming there was more than one correction.

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I'm assuming it was this afternoon?

I am grateful withto this web-site and everyone who has helped me.

English speakers use "website", they don't separate it out with a hyphen. If you want to be informal, we just say "site".