Today is the twenty- second (22nd) day of my daily English challenge.

I would normally write "the 22nd" so I've added that here

This afternoon, I spent my time reading a passage in aloud many timespeatedly reading a text out loud.

I don't need to use the English dictionary.

I was delighted to continue write ion the website each day.

If I keep this method up, I can improve my English level.

I am grateful for the is website and everyone who helps me.

This afternoon, I spent my time reading a passage in aloud many times.

Now, I understand the whole passage.

I don't need to use an English dictionary.

Could be ‘my’ instead of an

I was delighted to continue to write in the site each day.

If I keep to this method I can improve my English level.

This afternoon, I spent my time reading a passage in aloud many times.

Now, I understand the whole passage.

I was delighted to continue write ikeep writing on theis site eachvery day.

If I keep this methodwriting everyday, I can improve my English level.

Another suggestion: You could just say "I can improve my English" or if you want to be more assertive "My English will get better/improve". "Get better" is a bit more informal but still works.

I am grateful for theis site and everyone who helps me.