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courageuse19

Oct. 13, 2022

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Challenge, Day 13

Today was the thirteenth day of my English challenge. I read a text aloud. There were a bunch of words I didn't understand their meaning, therefore, I had to look up in a dictionary English to English and built up my vocabulary.

I have a confesse for you, Learning English alone is not an easy task for me. But I stay strong and keep improving. I am sure I will reach my goals.

Finally, I want to thank everone heleping and correcting me.

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Today was the thirteenth day of my English challenge.

I read a text aloud.

There were a bunch of words where I didn't understand their meaning, t. Therefore, I had to look them up in a dictionary English to English and builtd up my vocabulary.

I have a confesseion for you, L: learning English alone is not an easy task for me.

Finally, I want to thank everyone for heleping and correcting me.

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courageuse19

Oct. 14, 2022

2

Thank you very much.

There were a bunch of words I didn't understand their meaning, therefore,. So I had to look them up in a dictionary English to English dictionary and builtd up my vocabulary.

Their meaning isn't necessary since you already say you don't understand them.

I have ato confesse for you, Llearning English aloneby myself is not an easy task for me.

There's no need to say "for you", it comes across as overfamiliar.

Finally, I want to thank everyone heleping and correctping me.

Either helping or correcting would be ok, you don't need both.

I have a confesse for you, Llearning English alone is not an easy task for me.

just small spelling/capitalization

But I stay strong and keep improving.

I am sure I will reach my goals.

Finally, I want to thank everone heleping and correcting me.

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Good luck on your journey! :)

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courageuse19

Oct. 14, 2022

2

Thank you very much.

Challenge, Day 13

Today was the thirteenth day of my English challenge.

I read a textpassage aloud.

i get what you mean when you say "text", but i think "passage" here sounds more natural

There were a bunch of words I didn't understand their meaning, therefore,, so I had to look them up in an English dictionary English to English and builtd up my vocabulary.

I have a confesse for you, Lion to make: learning English aloneby myself is not an easy task for me.

But I stay strong and keep improving.

I am sure I will reach my goals.

Finally, I want to thank everyone for heleping and correcting me.

Feedback

Good luck with your challenge! You write really well!

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courageuse19

Oct. 13, 2022

2

Thank you very much.

Challenge, Day 13


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Today was the thirteenth day of my English challenge.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I read a text aloud.


I read a textpassage aloud.

i get what you mean when you say "text", but i think "passage" here sounds more natural

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There were a bunch of words I didn't understand their meaning, therefore, I had to look up in a dictionary English to English and built up my vocabulary.


There were a bunch of words I didn't understand their meaning, therefore,, so I had to look them up in an English dictionary English to English and builtd up my vocabulary.

There were a bunch of words I didn't understand their meaning, therefore,. So I had to look them up in a dictionary English to English dictionary and builtd up my vocabulary.

Their meaning isn't necessary since you already say you don't understand them.

There were a bunch of words where I didn't understand their meaning, t. Therefore, I had to look them up in a dictionary English to English and builtd up my vocabulary.

I have a confesse for you, Learning English alone is not an easy task for me.


I have a confesse for you, Lion to make: learning English aloneby myself is not an easy task for me.

I have a confesse for you, Llearning English alone is not an easy task for me.

just small spelling/capitalization

I have ato confesse for you, Llearning English aloneby myself is not an easy task for me.

There's no need to say "for you", it comes across as overfamiliar.

I have a confesseion for you, L: learning English alone is not an easy task for me.

But I stay strong and keep improving.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am sure I will reach my goals.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Finally, I want to thank everone heleping and correcting me.


Finally, I want to thank everyone for heleping and correcting me.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Finally, I want to thank everyone heleping and correctping me.

Either helping or correcting would be ok, you don't need both.

Finally, I want to thank everyone for heleping and correcting me.

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