First of all, I want to thank everyone for helpeding and correcteding me.

Today was the eleventh day of my English challenge.

I worked very hard and I wanted to share with you ion this site what I did .

Yes, I was so excited to tell evreryone.

I wrote down what I did in a daily life, then I spoke to a friend over Skype.

Then, I read to her my paragraph to her.

I can't believe it!!

I aslo read online dictionarylso looked up some words I didn't understand in an online dictionary.

I figure after sending an email to a friend I am going to read some pages of a book.

I am hopefully for you and the website.

I'm unsure what the exact meaning of this sentence is.

First of all, I want to thank everyone for helpeding and correcteding me.

You could also say "everyone who helped and corrected me"

Today was the eleventh day of my English challenge.

I worked very hard and I wanted to share with you ion this site what I did .

When talking about sites (either web or real), we usually say "on"

Yes, I was so excited to tell evreryone.

I wrote down what I did in amy daily life, then I spoke to a friend over Skype.

"a daily life" makes it sound like you have more than one daily life. You could also just say "what I did today"

wWe talspoked in French.

"Talking" is more for like... the act of discussing (we talked about our days) . "Speaking" is about what kind of sounds are coming out of your mouth (we spoke in French). You can also use "speaking" like "talking" (We spoke about our days), but it's more formal.

Then, I read to her my paragraph. to her.

What you originally said wasn't wrong, but it sounds a little unnatural.

She Sspecifically said.

I can't believe it!!

I aslo read online dictionarylso looked up the definitions of some words I didn't understand in the dictionary.

"Reading the dictionary" implies that you're reading through it like a novel. You generally say you "looked up something [the definitions of words you didn't understand] in the dictionary".

I figure I am going to read a book after sending an email to a friend I am going to read some pages of a book.

The way you said the sentence before works better in speech than in writing. It's not wrong, but it's hard to put proper punctuation in.

Also, you don't have to say that you're going to read some pages of a book. Most people will assume that you aren't going to read the whole thing at once lol

I am hopethankfully for you and the website.

I'm not sure what you were trying to say here, so I just assumed.