March 26, 2023
Help me correct! Thanks!
I was assigned a task to analyze the business performance of one product and provide some insights for next plan.
I was lost in abundant data and could not figure out how to construct a framework.
In the end, I constructed the framework, but I still spent too much time analyzing data and hesitating.
Hopefully, I will be more efficient this afternoon.
Perhaps, I should have a big picture in mind first and find materials as fast as possible.
I was assigned a task to analyze the business performance of one product and provide some insights for next plan.
I was lost in abundantthe quantity data and could not figure out how to construct a framework.
I would only use abundant in a positive meaning.
In the end, I constructed the framework, but I still spent too much time analyzing data and hesitatingsecond guessing myself.
Your original sentence made sense but if you wanted to sounds more like a native speaker "second guessing myself" would be appropriate.
Hopefully, I will be more efficient this afternoon.
Perhaps, I should have a big picture in mind first and find materials as fast as possible.
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Very well wrote, good luck with your data analysis.
March 26, 2023
Thanks Fortorchid. This helps a lot😄
I was assigned a task to analyze the business performance of one product and provide some insights for the next plan.
I was lost in abundantexcessive data and could not figure out how to construct a framework.
abundant means 'more than enough' since context here is 'too much' excessive is better
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I was assigned a task to analyze the business performance of one product and provide some insights for next plan. I was assigned a task to analyze the business performance of one product and provide some insights for the next plan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was lost in abundant data and could not figure out how to construct a framework. I was lost in abundant means 'more than enough' since context here is 'too much' excessive is better I was lost in I would only use abundant in a positive meaning. |
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In the end, I constructed the framework, but I still spent too much time analyzing data and hesitating. In the end, I constructed the framework, but I still spent too much time analyzing data and Your original sentence made sense but if you wanted to sounds more like a native speaker "second guessing myself" would be appropriate. |
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Hopefully, I will be more efficient this afternoon. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Perhaps, I should have a big picture in mind first and find materials as fast as possible. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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