Oct. 4, 2021
Challapalca prison
It's the worst Peruvian prison. The worst of the worst Peruvian criminals are sent there. The conditions there are extreme as it is located at a high altitude. That's why the lack of oxygen is one of the issues the inmates go through.
It's almost impossible to escape, not because of the prison itself but because of its location. Even if someone manages to get out, they would have to walk at least 10 kilometers to reach the nearest village. Could imagine having to walk 10k under conditions that include extreme cold and lack of oxygen just to reach a village at which police officers are likely to be waiting for you?
Some NGOs demanded the Peruvian government change the situation of the prisioners but very little has been done.
After all, who would care about a prison in which the worst of society is held?
The prison became famous around the globe when Joran Van Der Slot , a Dutchman accused of murdering the daughter of a Peruvian politician. It's worth mentioning that Joran also murdered an American some years earlier. That's why he became quite famous in that country
It's the worst Peruvian prison.
The worst of the worst Peruvian criminals are sent there.
The conditions there are extreme as it is located at a high altitude.
That's why the lack of oxygen is one of the issues the inmates go through.
It's almost impossible to escape, not because of the prison itself but because of its location.
Even if someone manages to get out, they would have to walk at least 10 kilometers to reach the nearest village.
Could you imagine having to walk 10k under conditions that include extreme cold and lack of oxygen just to reach a village at whichwhere police officers are likely to be waiting for you?
Some NGOs demanded the Peruvian government change the situation of the prisioners but very little has been done.
The prison became famous around the globe when Joran Van Der Slot , a Dutchman accused of murdering the daughter of a Peruvian politician.
The prison became famous when he did what? This sentence should be "The prison became famous around the globe when JVDS, a Dutchman accused of murdering the daughter of a Peruvian politician, [did something]."
It's worth mentioning that Joran also murdered an American some years earlier.
That's why he became quite famous in that country.
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It's the worst Peruvian prison. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The worst of the worst Peruvian criminals are sent there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The conditions there are extreme as it is located at a high altitude. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That's why the lack of oxygen is one of the issues the inmates go through. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's almost impossible to escape, not because of the prison itself but because of its location. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Even if someone manages to get out, they would have to walk at least 10 kilometers to reach the nearest village. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Could imagine having to walk 10k under conditions that include extreme cold and lack of oxygen just to reach a village at which police officers are likely to be waiting for you? Could you imagine having to walk 10k under conditions that include extreme cold and lack of oxygen just to reach a village |
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Some NGOs demanded the Peruvian government change the situation of the prisioners but very little has been done. Some NGOs demanded the Peruvian government change the situation of the pris |
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After all, who would care about a prison in which the worst of society is held? |
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The prison became famous around the globe when Joran Van Der Slot , a Dutchman accused of murdering the daughter of a Peruvian politician. The prison became famous around the globe when Joran Van Der Slot The prison became famous when he did what? This sentence should be "The prison became famous around the globe when JVDS, a Dutchman accused of murdering the daughter of a Peruvian politician, [did something]." |
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It's worth mentioning that Joran also murdered an American some years earlier. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That's why he became quite famous in that country That's why he became quite famous in that country. |
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