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Ducky

Jan. 25, 2022

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Chains

This is an illustration inspired in the chain of a motorcycle. The image is symmetrical in the shape and in some colours, but not all. For break the monotony, some colors go out of this chromatic symmetry. As a result, we have an attractive and nice design. This has remembered me the years when I was traveling everywhere with my motorbike.

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Chains

This is an illustration inspired inby the chain of a motorcycle.

The image is symmetrical in the shape and inuses some colours, but not all.

ForTo break the monotony, some colors go out of this chromatic symmetry.

The language used here is overall a bit confusing.

As a result, we have an attractive and nice design.

This has rememberinded me of the years when I was traveling everywhere with my motorbike.

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Ducky

Jan. 27, 2022

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Thanks.

Chains

This is an illustration inspired in theby a chain of a motorcycles.

The image is symmetrical in the shape and in some colours, but not all.

ForTo break the monotony, some colors go out of this chromatic symmetry.

As a result, we have an attractive and nice design.

This has remembered mereminds me of the years when I wasused to traveling everywhere withon my motorbike.

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Chains

This is an illustration inspired inby the chain of a motorcycle.

The image is symmetrical in the shape and in some colours, but not all.

ForTo break the monotony, some colors go out of this chromaticare not in perfect symmetry.

I changed the wording a bit because your original wording felt a little unusual to me for some reason.

As a result, we have an nice and attractive and nice design.

I changed the word order to fit the typical adjective word order.

This has rememberinded me of the years when I was travelinged everywhere with my motorbike.

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Ducky

Jan. 26, 2022

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Thanks a lot.

Chains

This is an illustration inspired inby the chain of a motorcycle.

The image is symmetrical in the shape and in some colours, but not all.

ForTo break the monotony, some colors go out ofstray from this chromatic symmetry.

As a result, we have an attractive and nice design.

This has rememberreminded me of the years when I was traveling everywhere with my motorbike.

It reminds me of my youth. Em recorda la meva joventut.

I remember it well. Ho recordo bé.

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Ducky

Jan. 26, 2022

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Gràcies per la correcció i pels comentaris en Català.

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diggn

Jan. 26, 2022

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De res :) Espero haver pogut marcar la diferència entre 'remember' i 'remind' clara.

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This is an illustration inspired in the chain of a motorcycle.


This is an illustration inspired inby the chain of a motorcycle.

This is an illustration inspired inby the chain of a motorcycle.

This is an illustration inspired in theby a chain of a motorcycles.

This is an illustration inspired inby the chain of a motorcycle.

The image is symmetrical in the shape and in some colours, but not all.


The image is symmetrical in the shape and in some colours, but not all.

The image is symmetrical in the shape and in some colours, but not all.

The image is symmetrical in the shape and in some colours, but not all.

The image is symmetrical in the shape and inuses some colours, but not all.

For break the monotony, some colors go out of this chromatic symmetry.


ForTo break the monotony, some colors go out ofstray from this chromatic symmetry.

ForTo break the monotony, some colors go out of this chromaticare not in perfect symmetry.

I changed the wording a bit because your original wording felt a little unusual to me for some reason.

ForTo break the monotony, some colors go out of this chromatic symmetry.

ForTo break the monotony, some colors go out of this chromatic symmetry.

The language used here is overall a bit confusing.

As a result, we have an attractive and nice design.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As a result, we have an nice and attractive and nice design.

I changed the word order to fit the typical adjective word order.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This has remembered me the years when I was traveling everywhere with my motorbike.


This has rememberreminded me of the years when I was traveling everywhere with my motorbike.

It reminds me of my youth. Em recorda la meva joventut. I remember it well. Ho recordo bé.

This has rememberinded me of the years when I was travelinged everywhere with my motorbike.

This has remembered mereminds me of the years when I wasused to traveling everywhere withon my motorbike.

This has rememberinded me of the years when I was traveling everywhere with my motorbike.

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