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Sept. 23, 2021

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My Hometown

My hometown is a small village far away from Seoul.
So there are lots of good places where many people don’t know and do ‘t visit.

First, there are nice place where a river flows around there.
The place seems like an island but one direction still connects with main land.
Because of this scene, people visit there and take pictures.

Next, there are many small valleys where children can swim.
The water is also clear, so we can see the bottom of the river.
So my family visits more than 4 times a year.

Because of these reasons, I like traveling to my home.
Whenever I have a chance, I go there with my family.

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SummerTeaWater

Sept. 23, 2021

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My Hometown

My hometown is a small village far away from Seoul.

So there are lots of good places where many people don’t know and do ‘t visit.

So there are lots of good places where many people don’t know and do n‘t visit. So there are lots of good places where many people don’t know and don‘t visit.

First, there are nice place where a river flows around there.

First, there areis a nice place where a river flows around ithere. First, there is a nice place where a river flows around it.

The place seems like an island but one direction still connects with main land.

The place seems like an island but one directionis still connectsed with the main land on one direction. The place seems like an island but is still connected with the main land on one direction.

Because of this scene, people visit there and take pictures.

Next, there are many small valleys where children can swim.

The water is also clear, so we can see the bottom of the river.

So my family visits more than 4 times a year.

Because of these reasons, I like traveling to my home.

Whenever I have a chance, I go there with my family.

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