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sabina45fd

July 20, 2023

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My Summer

The summer is mine favourite season. Because I really love to spend some time in self improvement(development?),reading,studying and resting. And most importantly,we have holidays in all the summer. I think the summer is the best time when you can develop. I think development in life is the best for people. What could be better? The most beautiful thing is when you do what you want and don’t think about your actions. I sincerely hope that people will rejoice about every moment in their life.

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July 26, 2023

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My Summer

The summer is mine favourite season.

The summer is miney favourite season. The summer is my favourite season.

If you are learning American English it's "favorite" and if you are learning British English it's "favourite."

Because I really love to spend some time in self improvement(development?

Because I really love to spend some time in self improvement(development? Because I really love to spend some time in self improvement(development?

You can use the phrases "self improvement" or "self development." They mean the same thing.

),reading,studying and resting.

And most importantly,we have holidays in all the summer.

And most importantly, we have holidays in all thfor the whole summer. And most importantly, we have holidays for the whole summer.

I think the summer is the best time when you can develop.

I think the summer is the best time when you canto develop. I think the summer is the best time to develop.

I think development in life is the best for people.

What could be better?

The most beautiful thing is when you do what you want and don’t think about your actions.

I sincerely hope that people will rejoice about every moment in their life.

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