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Polyraspad

Jan. 9, 2025

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Central Park

I like parks but the most insipired for me is Central Park. It locates in the center of New York City.
Threre are trees, stones, walking paths placed and organized manually by people in it.
A lot of elaborate details that be showed in Hollywood movies, tv shows, video games.
Peoply who even never was there know it like it's a park in their own town!

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I like parks but the most insipiredational for me is Central Park.

inspired (one i) is more used when describing artistic works, and puts the focus on the mindset of the person or people who made that work. While you could argue a park layout could be artistic, it's stretching the definition enough that it just sounds weird. "Inspirational" might be what you meant. That would mean the park would inspire feelings and/or creativity in you.

It is locatesd in the center of New York City.

Since the park is an inanimate object, you want the passive word "located" here. "locates" also has a slightly different meaning anyway, it is a form of "to locate" which means "to find" usually, or sometimes "to place" depending on context.

Threre are trees, stones, and walking paths placed and organized manually by people in it.

You need an "and" for the last item in a list in the middle of written text.

A lot of elaborate details that bare showedn in Hollywood movies, tv shows, and video games.

Peoplye who evenwere never waseven there know it like it's a park in their own town!

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I definitely had similar experiences the first time I went to New York. Everything felt strangely familiar despite never going there before.

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Polyraspad

Jan. 10, 2025

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Thank you very much!

I like parks but the most insipired for meove going to parks a lot, one of my favorite parks to visit is Central Park.

The start of the sentence was a bit bad

A lot of elaborate details thats be showed in Hollywood movies, tv shows, video games.

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Polyraspad

Jan. 10, 2025

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Thanks for the clarification!

Central Park

I like parks but the most insipired for me is Central Park.

"Inspired" may be correct, but I think you are probably looking for "inspiring" or "inspirational."

"Inspired" places the emphasis on how the creator has a strong imagination. The creator was inspired to make the park so beautifully.

"Inspiring" or "inspirational" places the emphasis on how the park makes YOU feel. If you feel inspired by looking at/thinking about the park, then you should write "inspiring" or "inspirational."

It is locatesd in the center of New York City.

Threre are trees, stones, and walking paths placed and organized manually by people in it.

Hmm, I wouldn't say those things are placed by the people IN the park. They're placed and organized by the city government. The people in the park enjoy those things.

AThere are (?) a lot of elaborate details that bare showedn in Hollywood movies, tvTV shows, video games.

The original isn't a complete sentence.

Peoplye who ehaven never waseven been there know it like it's a park in their own town!

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Very well written!

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Polyraspad

Jan. 10, 2025

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I appreciate it!

Central Park


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I like parks but the most insipired for me is Central Park.


I like parks but the most insipired for me is Central Park.

"Inspired" may be correct, but I think you are probably looking for "inspiring" or "inspirational." "Inspired" places the emphasis on how the creator has a strong imagination. The creator was inspired to make the park so beautifully. "Inspiring" or "inspirational" places the emphasis on how the park makes YOU feel. If you feel inspired by looking at/thinking about the park, then you should write "inspiring" or "inspirational."

I like parks but the most insipired for meove going to parks a lot, one of my favorite parks to visit is Central Park.

The start of the sentence was a bit bad

I like parks but the most insipiredational for me is Central Park.

inspired (one i) is more used when describing artistic works, and puts the focus on the mindset of the person or people who made that work. While you could argue a park layout could be artistic, it's stretching the definition enough that it just sounds weird. "Inspirational" might be what you meant. That would mean the park would inspire feelings and/or creativity in you.

It locates in the center of New York City.


It is locatesd in the center of New York City.

It is locatesd in the center of New York City.

Since the park is an inanimate object, you want the passive word "located" here. "locates" also has a slightly different meaning anyway, it is a form of "to locate" which means "to find" usually, or sometimes "to place" depending on context.

Threre are trees, stones, walking paths placed and organized manually by people in it.


Threre are trees, stones, and walking paths placed and organized manually by people in it.

Hmm, I wouldn't say those things are placed by the people IN the park. They're placed and organized by the city government. The people in the park enjoy those things.

Threre are trees, stones, and walking paths placed and organized manually by people in it.

You need an "and" for the last item in a list in the middle of written text.

A lot of elaborate details that be showed in Hollywood movies, tv shows, video games.


AThere are (?) a lot of elaborate details that bare showedn in Hollywood movies, tvTV shows, video games.

The original isn't a complete sentence.

A lot of elaborate details thats be showed in Hollywood movies, tv shows, video games.

A lot of elaborate details that bare showedn in Hollywood movies, tv shows, and video games.

Peoply who even never was there know it like it's a park in their own town!


Peoplye who ehaven never waseven been there know it like it's a park in their own town!

Peoplye who evenwere never waseven there know it like it's a park in their own town!

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