Nov. 8, 2023
vocabulary choice
do "beneficial, advantageous, optimistic, favourale" can replace positive in the context of positive trends?
does this sentence sound natural? democratic filmmaking can create remarkable improvements for both individual people and movie production companies.
what about this? democratic filmmaking can bring benefits for both individual people and movie production companies.
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doCan "beneficial, advantageous, optimistic, favourable" can replace positive in the context of positive trends?
Can "beneficial, advantageous, optimistic, favorable" replace positive in the context of positive trends?
Sorry, this may be an interesting questions, but it's not clear what "replace positive" should mean. If you mean are they "interchangeable" and all carry positive connotations: somewhat, but the context can make things tricky and they have different grammar.
dDoes this sentence sound natural?
Does this sentence sound natural?
dDemocratic filmmaking can creatmake remarkable improvements for both the individual peoples and movie production companies involved.
Democratic filmmaking can make remarkable improvements for both the individuals and movie production companies involved.
wWhat about this?
What about this?
dDemocratic filmmaking can bringe benefitscial for both the individual peoples and movie production companies involved.
Democratic filmmaking can be beneficial for both the individuals and movie production companies involved.
"Advantageous" and "favorable are also usable here, but "optimistic" is not.
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I think what's important to recognize here is that the use of "advantageous" and "favorable" are very contrastive so the sentence has an implied "... compared to other filmmaking processes" ending. "Favorable," "can create remarkable improvements," and "can bring benefits," more emphasize the value of democratic filmmaking than imply a comparison.
My advice would be if you want to convince someone to switch from their current method of filmmaking to democratic filmmaking, you want that contrast so "advantageous" or "favorable" is better. If you want to convince someone to add democratic processes on top of what they're already doing, "can make remarkable improvements."
doCan "beneficial, advantageous, optimistic, favourable" can replace the word "positive" in the context of positive trends?
Can "beneficial, advantageous, optimistic, favorable" replace the word "positive" in the context of positive trends?
democratic filmmaking can create remarkable improvements for both individual people and movie production companies.
democratic filmmaking can bring benefits for both individual people and movie production companies.
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do "beneficial, advantageous, optimistic, favourale" can replace positive in the context of positive trends?
Sorry, this may be an interesting questions, but it's not clear what "replace positive" should mean. If you mean are they "interchangeable" and all carry positive connotations: somewhat, but the context can make things tricky and they have different grammar. |
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does this sentence sound natural?
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democratic filmmaking can create remarkable improvements for both individual people and movie production companies. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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what about this?
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democratic filmmaking can bring benefits for both individual people and movie production companies. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
"Advantageous" and "favorable are also usable here, but "optimistic" is not. |
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