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jjorajj

May 27, 2020

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if someone gave me $100 million, what would I do with it?

Well, after kissing her or him. I will travel to China to learn Chinese...

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jjorajj

May 27, 2020

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if someone gave me $100 million, what would I do with it?


iIf someone gave me $100 million, what would I do with it? If someone gave me $100 million, what would I do?

Capital letters at the start of sentences. Since - in the passage - you don't say what you would do *with the money* but instead say what you would do generally, you should remove the "with it" of the money.

Well, after kissing her or him.


Well, after kissgiving ther or him.m a big kiss, Well, after giving them a big kiss,

Well, after kissing her or him., Well, after kissing her or him,

I will travel to China to learn Chinese...


I willould travel to China to learn Chinese... I would travel to China to learn Chinese.

I willould travel to China to learn Chinese... I would travel to China to learn Chinese...

(From your title) "If somone gave" is a conditional statement, so you should use "would" here too since it' sconditional. If your title sais "If somes *gives* me...", then you should use "I will travel..." here. Hope that makes sense.

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