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我的声音

我的声音不大。我从小每次不大声说话。所以我想改变这个习惯。不过我若是想大声说话,我需要大声练习。但是我怕打扰邻居。因为在我学校那边,我宿舍特别安静,有些时候太安静地我不喜欢。怎么办呢?


My voice is not loud. Since I was a child, I don't speak loudly, so I want to change this habit. However, if I want to speak louder, I need to practice loudly. But I’m afraid of disturbing my neighbors. Because over at my school, my hostel is especially quiet, sometimes it’s so quiet that I don’t like it. What should I do?

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我的声音

我的声音不大。

我从小每次不大就小声说话。

所以我想改变这个习惯。

不过我若是想大声说话,我需要大声练习。

但是我怕打扰邻居。

因为在我学校那边,我宿舍特别安静,有些时候安静我不喜欢。

怎么办呢?

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找一个安全的街角,大点声练外语?反正路过的人也都听不到。

我的声音

我的声音不大。

从小每次不时候起,我就不太大声说话。

所以我想改这个习惯。

不过我若是想大声说话,我需要大声练习。

但是我怕打扰邻居。

因为在我学校那边,我宿舍特别安静,有些时候太安静地我不喜欢时安静得让我有些不适应

怎么办呢?

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Marvelously written, good work!

我的声音


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我的声音不大。


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我从小每次不大声说话。


从小每次不时候起,我就不太大声说话。

我从小每次不大就小声说话。

所以我想改变这个习惯。


所以我想改这个习惯。

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不过我若是想大声说话,我需要大声练习。


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但是我怕打扰邻居。


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但是我怕打扰邻居。

因为在我学校那边,我宿舍特别安静,有些时候太安静地我不喜欢。


因为在我学校那边,我宿舍特别安静,有些时候太安静地我不喜欢时安静得让我有些不适应

因为在我学校那边,我宿舍特别安静,有些时候安静我不喜欢。

怎么办呢?


怎么办呢?

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