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What is actually a friendship? We as people , as humano long for deep , meaningful connections but at the same time we want 1000 followers on Instagram and being in contact with people we don’t really care about and that we don’t even consider a friend/we don’t consider even a friend.(personas que ni siquera consideramos amigos,I don’t know where “even “ should be situated)
We do that for our ego and I actually think is sad and I am quite ashamed of myself for being caught in this trap for a couple of years now .
As a New Years resolution I want to connect more with people that I care about and less with people that I couldn’t give a shit about them .
In the end I don’t think we’re meant to talk with so many people and that can produce a feeling of emptiness at least in my experience.. I just want 2-3 good friends that I talk regularly, and my family and let go of all the other distractions, the noise of the world and do whatever the fuck I want. Time is limited.Let’s spend our life being 1000% true with us and what we feel,want,need in order to be happy. Cheers 🥂 my friends.

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Cheers 🥂 my friends.

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Cheers 🥂 my friends.

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What is actually a friendship?


What is actually is a friendship? What actually is a friendship?

What is actually ais friendship? What actually is friendship?

We as people , as humano long for deep , meaningful connections but at the same time we want 1000 followers on Instagram and being in contact with people we don’t really care about and that we don’t even consider a friend/we don’t consider even a friend.


We as people , as humanos, long for deep , meaningful connections but at the same time wesimultaneously want 1000 followers on Instagram, and beingto be in contact with people we don’t really care about and that we don’t even consider a friend/we don’t consider even a friend. We as people, as humans, long for deep, meaningful connections but simultaneously want 1000 followers on Instagram, and to be in contact with people we don’t really care about and that we don’t even consider a friend.

We as people , as humanos, long for deep , meaningful connections but at the same time we want 1,000 followers on Instagram, and beingwe want to be in contact with people we don’t really care about and that we don’t even consider a friend/we don’t consider even a friend. We as people, as humans, long for deep, meaningful connections but at the same time we want 1,000 followers on Instagram, and we want to be in contact with people we don’t really care about and that we don’t even consider a friend.

(personas que ni siquera consideramos amigos,I don’t know where “even “ should be situated)


(personas que ni siquera consideramos amigos,I don’t know where “even “ should be situated) (personas que ni siquera consideramos amigos,I don’t know where “even “ should be situated)

The even can be placed in either position, but will change the emphasis of the sentence, and so have slightly different meanings. Don't even consider a friend: You are emphasizing the word "consider". I think more people would use it this way, so that's why I corrected this way. I think the effect is this sentence is less strong than the other one. If I say about someone "I don't even consider him a friend", you would think that I might not like him. Don't consider even a friend: You are emphasizing the word "friend". I think this is a more strong statement. If I say about someone "I don't consider him even a friend", you would think I hate him, or at least dislike the person more than if I said the other way. This is why this placement is more often used for more negative meanings. For example: "I don't consider him even an acquaintance."

We do that for our ego and I actually think is sad and I am quite ashamed of myself for being caught in this trap for a couple of years now .


We do that for our ego and I actually think that is sad and. I am quite ashamed of myself for being caught in this trap for a couple of years now . We do that for our ego and I actually think that is sad. I am quite ashamed of myself for being caught in this trap for a couple of years now.

I think an important part of natural sounding English is to avoid very long sentences. I recommend avoiding putting more than two ideas in one sentence. If you find yourself using a lot of "and" then it is usually a good idea to see if you could use more sentences instead. However, this is only a general rule, so sometimes it will be better to just use a long sentence.

We do that for our ego and I actually think it's sad, and I am quite ashamed of myself for being caught in this trap for a couple of years now . We do that for our ego and I actually think it's sad, and I am quite ashamed of myself for being caught in this trap for a couple of years now.

As a New Years resolution I want to connect more with people that I care about and less with people that I couldn’t give a shit about them .


As a New Years resolution I want to connect more with people that I care about and less with people that I couldn’t give a shit about them . As a New Years resolution I want to connect more with people that I care about and less with people that I couldn’t give a shit about.

As a New Year's resolution I want to connect more with people that I care about and less with people that I couldn’t give a shit about them . As a New Year's resolution I want to connect more with people that I care about and less with people that I couldn’t give a shit about.

In the end I don’t think we’re meant to talk with so many people and that can produce a feeling of emptiness at least in my experience..


In the end I don’t think we’re meant to talk with stoo many people and thatdoing so can produce a feeling of emptiness, at least in my experience.. In the end I don’t think we’re meant to talk with too many people and doing so can produce a feeling of emptiness, at least in my experience.

In the end I don’t think we’re meant to talk with so many people andbecause that can produce a feeling of emptiness at least in my experience.. In the end I don’t think we’re meant to talk with so many people because that can produce a feeling of emptiness at least in my experience.

I just want 2-3 good friends that I talk regularly, and my family and let go of all the other distractions, the noise of the world and do whatever the fuck I want.


I just want 2-3 good friends that I talk with regularly, and my family and. To let go of all the other distractions, the noise of the world and do whatever the fuck I want. I just want 2-3 good friends that I talk with regularly and my family. To let go of the noise of the world and do whatever the fuck I want.

I think many people would correct this in many different ways, so I think the specific correction is not important. The important idea is again, this sentence is a bit too long and sounds wrong in English, so it should be shortened and broken up into more sentences. How you do that will change on who is correcting.

I just want 2-3 good friends that I talk to regularly, and my family and let go of all the other distractions, the noise of the world, and do whatever the fuck I want. I just want 2-3 good friends that I talk to regularly and my family and let go of all the other distractions, the noise of the world, and do whatever the fuck I want.

Time is limited.Let’s spend our life being 1000% true with us and what we feel,want,need in order to be happy.


Time is limited. Let’s spend our life being 1000% true with uto ourselves and what we feel, want, and need in order to be happy. Time is limited. Let’s spend our life being 1000% true to ourselves and what we feel, want and need in order to be happy.

Time is limited. Let’s spend our life being 1,000% true with us and what we feel, want, and need in order to be happy. Time is limited. Let’s spend our life being 1,000% true with us and what we feel, want, and need in order to be happy.

Cheers 🥂 my friends.


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