May 22, 2020
Cat's Mustache
Three days ago, I did a terrible thing with my cat. I cut his mustache. When I did, I didn’t know that was a bad thing. Until today, I just realized how much terrible. My cat doesn’t look like before. Why I said my cat doesn’t look like before, because he was a fun cat, he was so active, he run and jumped all day. But now, he almost sleeps all day and he doesn’t eat anything. My sister said because I cut his mustache, I don’t believe it, so i searched on Google and I have to agree with my sister. That’s all my fault. Now I'm worried and regret.
Three days ago, I did a terrible thing withto my cat.
"With": You and your cat did something terrible together
"To": You did something terrible
When I did that, I didn’t know that was a bad thing.
Until today, I just realized how much terrible.
My cat doesn’t look like before.
Why I saidy my cat doesn’t look like before, because before, he was a fun cat, he was so active, he ruan and jumped all day.
But now, he almost sleepssleeps almost all day, and he doesn’t eat anything.
"Almost" is modifying "all day" not "sleeps," so it needs to be attached to that.
My sister said it was because I cut his mustache,. I don’idn't believe it, so i searchedI looked it up on Google and now I have to agree with my sister.
You imply that you changed, so "now" (or something else to indicate that) is necessary.
That’s all my fault.
Now I'm worried and full of regret.
Or: "Now I'm worried and regret it."
Feedback
I hope things turn out okay for you and your cat!
Also, I must note that "mustache" is acceptable if it's part of how you are trying to characterize what happened, but "whiskers" may be more appropriate.
May 23, 2020
Yeah, Thanks for your help.
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Cat's Mustache |
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Three days ago, I did a terrible thing with my cat. Three days ago, I did a terrible thing "With": You and your cat did something terrible together "To": You did something terrible |
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I cut his mustache. |
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When I did, I didn’t know that was a bad thing. When I did that, I didn’t know that was a bad thing. |
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Until today, I just realized how much terrible. Until today, I just realized how |
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My cat doesn’t look like before. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Why I said my cat doesn’t look like before, because he was a fun cat, he was so active, he run and jumped all day.
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But now, he almost sleeps all day and he doesn’t eat anything. But now, he "Almost" is modifying "all day" not "sleeps," so it needs to be attached to that. |
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My sister said because I cut his mustache, I don’t believe it, so i searched on Google and I have to agree with my sister. My sister said it was because I cut his mustache You imply that you changed, so "now" (or something else to indicate that) is necessary. |
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That’s all my fault. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now I;m worried and regret. |
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Now I'm worried and regret. Now I'm worried and full of regret. Or: "Now I'm worried and regret it." |
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