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alexwong2164

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Catherine Classic 2011

I am a game fans PC, PS…

But there are too many good games.

I don’t think “one life” is enough to play all the games that I want to play.

So, I decided give up playing any games but I do installed to my computer.

Hoping someday I will suddenly got time to finish all those games!

Yesterday I watched a video about a game in 2011.

I like this game immediately because is simple, good graphic and is “old”.

Because my computer also is an old model.

I am playing this game now!

It is not fair to all the games that already installed in my computer.

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Catherine Classic 2011

I am a game fans PC, PS…

But there are too many good games.

I don’t think one life is enough to play all the games that I want to play.

The quotation marks look odd to me here

So, I decided to give up playing any games but I dothat are installed ton my computer.

I'm not sure about "but I do" here. Do you mean that you will keep installing new games on your computer, or that you will keep the games already installed on your computer?

Hopingefully someday I will suddenly goet time to finish all those games!

Yesterday I watched a video about a game in 2011.

I liked this game immediately because it is simple, has good graphics and is “old”.

Because my computer is also is an old model.

I am playing this game now!

It is not fair to all the games that are already installed in my computer.

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Catherine Classic 2011


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I am a game fans PC, PS…


I am a game fans PC, PS…

But there are too many good games.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don’t think “one life” is enough to play all the games that I want to play.


I don’t think one life is enough to play all the games that I want to play.

The quotation marks look odd to me here

So, I decided give up playing any games but I do installed to my computer.


So, I decided to give up playing any games but I dothat are installed ton my computer.

I'm not sure about "but I do" here. Do you mean that you will keep installing new games on your computer, or that you will keep the games already installed on your computer?

Hoping someday I will suddenly got time to finish all those games!


Hopingefully someday I will suddenly goet time to finish all those games!

Yesterday I watched a video about a game in 2011.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I like this game immediately because is simple, good graphic and is “old”.


I liked this game immediately because it is simple, has good graphics and is “old”.

Because my computer also is an old model.


Because my computer is also is an old model.

I am playing this game now!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is not fair to all the games that already installed in my computer.


It is not fair to all the games that are already installed in my computer.

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