Aug. 29, 2023
Catching Hares
When I was a child, the most interesting thing in autumn was seeing adults catching hares.
Farmers in my area usually plant cotton and sweet potatoes. The harvest season of the crops was at the end of September or the beginning of October.
At that time, the weather had become cold, and people needed to wear thick clothes.
After people harvested sweet potatoes, some broken sweet potatoes still remained in the field, so children liked to dig up the remaining sweet potatoes, and often, their dogs were with them.
Sometimes, while they were digging up the sweet potatoes, they saw a crowd of people coming to a piece of cotton field, and the people carried wooden sticks and nets.
The cotton fields in my area were all square shaped. The people's nets were very long rectangular in shape. The net was about 60 centimeters high and 60 meters long.
They used several short wooden sticks to stand up the net first along one side of the cotton field, and then they spread out to the other three sides, and gradually went into the cotton field.
While they were doing this, they used a long stick beating the cotton stalks on their left and right (the cotton had harvested and only remained stalks), and shouted out loudly. Of course, no one knew exactly what they were shouting.
Soon after, hares ran to the net and were trapped by the net. This was the most exciting moment. If a hare escaped from the net, the dogs in the field would deadly chase it. But no dog ran faster than a hare. The chasing was only a waste of dogs.
Even now, I still don't know where the people were from (maybe they were from other villages), and how they dealt with those hares. Anyway, seeing adults catch hares in the cotton fields was the most exciting thing in my childhood.
Catching Hares
When I was a child, the most interesting thing in the autumn was seeing adults catching hares.
Farmers in my area usually plant cotton and sweet potatoes.
or 'planted' if you want to keep it in the past tense.
The harvest season of the crops was at the end of September or the beginning of October.
At that time, the weather had becoame cold, and people needed to wear thick clothes.
Sometimes, while they were digging up the sweet potatoes, they saw a crowds of people coming to a piece ofthe cotton field, and t. The people carried wooden sticks and nets.
The cotton fields in my area were all square shaped.
The people's nets were a very long rectangular in shape.
The net was about 60 centimeters high and 60 meters long.
They used several short wooden sticks to stand up the net first along one side of the cotton field, and then they spread out to the other three sides, and gradually went into the cotton field.
While they were doing this, they used a long stick to beating the cotton stalks on their left and right (the cotton had been harvested and only the stalks remained stalks), and shouted out loudly.
Of course, no one knew exactly what they were shouting.
Soon after, hares ran into the net and were trapped by the net.
This was the most exciting moment.
If a hare escaped from the net, the dogs in the field would deadly chase it.
If you want to express that the chase could be deadly, you could add 'add try to kill it' at the end of the sentence.
But no dog ran faster than a hare.
The chasing was onlyjust a waste of dogs.the dogs' energy.
Even now, I still don't know where the people were from (maybe they were from other villages), and how they dealt with those hares.
Anyway, seeing adults catch hares in the cotton fields was the most exciting thing in my childhood.
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Aug. 29, 2023
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Catching Hares This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I was a child, the most interesting thing in autumn was seeing adults catching hares. When I was a child, the most interesting thing in the autumn was seeing adults catching hares. |
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Farmers in my area usually plant cotton and sweet potatoes. Farmers in my area usually plant cotton and sweet potatoes. or 'planted' if you want to keep it in the past tense. |
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The harvest season of the crops was at the end of September or the beginning of October. The harvest season |
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At that time, the weather had become cold, and people needed to wear thick clothes. At that time, the weather |
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After people harvested sweet potatoes, some broken sweet potatoes still remained in the field, so children liked to dig up the remaining sweet potatoes, and often, their dogs were with them. |
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Sometimes, while they were digging up the sweet potatoes, they saw a crowd of people coming to a piece of cotton field, and the people carried wooden sticks and nets. Sometimes, while they were digging up the sweet potatoes, they saw |
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The cotton fields in my area were all square shaped. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The people's nets were very long rectangular in shape. The people's nets were a very long rectangular |
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The net was about 60 centimeters high and 60 meters long. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They used several short wooden sticks to stand up the net first along one side of the cotton field, and then they spread out to the other three sides, and gradually went into the cotton field. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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While they were doing this, they used a long stick beating the cotton stalks on their left and right (the cotton had harvested and only remained stalks), and shouted out loudly. While they were doing this, they used a long stick to beat |
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Of course, no one knew exactly what they were shouting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Soon after, hares ran to the net and were trapped by the net. Soon after, hares ran into the net and were trapped by the net. |
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This was the most exciting moment. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If a hare escaped from the net, the dogs in the field would deadly chase it. If a hare escaped from the net, the dogs in the field would If you want to express that the chase could be deadly, you could add 'add try to kill it' at the end of the sentence. |
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But no dog ran faster than a hare. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The chasing was only a waste of dogs. The chasing was |
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Even now, I still don't know where the people were from (maybe they were from other villages), and how they dealt with those hares. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Anyway, seeing adults catch hares in the cotton fields was the most exciting thing in my childhood. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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