Jan. 10, 2023
Cat
Today eat watermelon and my dad bought my books for high school
Yesterday I saw a cat the colors white and orange
He fell and got hurt and I felt bad for he
Today, I eate watermelon and my dad bought my books for high school.
Yesterday, I saw a cat the colorsat had white and orange fur
He fell and, got hurt, and I felt bad for heim.
A Cat
This sounds more natural in the US for a title.
Today ewe ate watermelon and my dad bought my books for high school.
Yesterday I saw a cat thwhose colors were white and orange.
He fell and got hurt andso I felt bad for heim.
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Jan. 11, 2023
Thanks!
Today, I eate watermelon and my dad bought my books for high school
You need past tense here :)
Yesterday, I saw a cat the colorsat had white and orange fur
He fell and got hurt, and I felt bad for heim
(Poor cat!)
Jan. 11, 2023
Today, I eate watermelon and my dad bought my books for high school
my books- here my should be "me“
Jan. 11, 2023
my books- here my should be "me“
Oh, I think I just read it as 'my dad bought my books', but, yes, 'me' is correct. Thanks!
Today eI ate watermelon and my dad bought my books for high school
Yesterday I saw a cat the colors white and orange cat
He fell and got hurt and I felt bad for heim
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Today eat watermelon and my dad bought my books for high school Today Today, I You need past tense here :) Today Today, I |
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