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666coolboy

Sept. 1, 2022

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Today is my first day studying at HKUST, I feel excited and happy that I can get into such a great academic palace. I had been listening to three classes: introduction to computer science, science, and Chinese content in the digital area. I am enjoying it even if I am a little bit exhausted. That is how the university works ha? ( To make people busy and fulfill)

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Casual writing

Today is my first day studying at HKUST, I feelam excited and happy that I canould get into such a great academic palaceuniversity.

Alternatively:
Today is my first day studying at HKUST, I am excited and happy at being able to study at such a great university.

I had beenwas listening to three classes: iIntroduction to cComputer sScience, sScience, and Chinese content in the digital area.

Since you are listing the names of classes, you treat them like proper nouns and capitalise them.

I am enjoying it even if I am a little bit exhausted.

That is how the university works ha, no?

( To makeIt's to keep people busy and fulfill)ed.

Keep going!

GO!!

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666coolboy

Sept. 2, 2022

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Thank you!

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Today is my first day studying at HKUST, I feel excited and happy that I can get into such a great academic palace.


Today is my first day studying at HKUST, I feelam excited and happy that I canould get into such a great academic palaceuniversity.

Alternatively: Today is my first day studying at HKUST, I am excited and happy at being able to study at such a great university.

I had been listening to three classes: introduction to computer science, science, and Chinese content in the digital area.


I had beenwas listening to three classes: iIntroduction to cComputer sScience, sScience, and Chinese content in the digital area.

Since you are listing the names of classes, you treat them like proper nouns and capitalise them.

I am enjoying it even if I am a little bit exhausted.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That is how the university works ha?


That is how the university works ha, no?

( To make people busy and fulfill)


( To makeIt's to keep people busy and fulfill)ed.

Keep going!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

GO!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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