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666coolboy

Sept. 1, 2022

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Today is my first day studying at HKUST, I feel excited and happy that I can get into such a great academic palace. I had been listening to three classes: introduction to computer science, science, and Chinese content in the digital area. I am enjoying it even if I am a little bit exhausted. That is how the university works ha? ( To make people busy and fulfill)

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Today is my first day studying at HKUST, I feel excited and happy that I can get into such a great academic palace.

I had been (listening/attending/going to) to three classes: introduction to computer science, science, and Chinese content in the digital area.

"Listening" means you are only hearing the audio. If you are going into a classroom it would be better to use one of the above.

I am enjoying it even if I am a little bit exhausted.

That is how the university works ha, right?

If you are talking about something in general, or the idea of something, you can drop the article:

I like that dog over there.
The dog by my mom's house is nice.

I like all dogs.
Dogs are often good friends.

( To make people busy and feel fulfill)ed.

Keep going!

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Nice work, and congratulations on your first day at HKUST :)
I would really like to visit Hong Kong some day.

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666coolboy

Sept. 2, 2022

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Thank you for editing! Welcome to Hong Kong~

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Today is my first day studying at HKUST, I feel excited and happy that I can get into such a great academic palace.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I had been listening to three classes: introduction to computer science, science, and Chinese content in the digital area.


I had been (listening/attending/going to) to three classes: introduction to computer science, science, and Chinese content in the digital area.

"Listening" means you are only hearing the audio. If you are going into a classroom it would be better to use one of the above.

I am enjoying it even if I am a little bit exhausted.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That is how the university works ha?


That is how the university works ha, right?

If you are talking about something in general, or the idea of something, you can drop the article: I like that dog over there. The dog by my mom's house is nice. I like all dogs. Dogs are often good friends.

( To make people busy and fulfill)


( To make people busy and feel fulfill)ed.

Keep going!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

GO!!


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