July 14, 2020
Carrot Salad
Grate three carrots per person.
Add one spoon of sugar per person, some lemon juice and a bit of sunflower oil.
Mix the salad well.
It's a simple, healthy, colourful and cheap dessert that all children like.
Carrots are a good source of vitamin A. Vitamin A is not water soluble and the body needs the oil to absorb it. If you serve carrot salad after a main course that contains a lot of oil, you don't need to add any sunflower oil.
Drei Karotten pro Person reiben.
Einen Esslöffel Zucker pro Person, etwas Zitronensaft und ein bißchen Sonnenblumenöl hinzufügen.
Den Salat gut mischen.
Es ist eine einfache, gesunde, farbenfrohe und billige Nachspeise, die alle Kinder mögen.
Karotten sind eine gute Quelle für Vitamin A. Vitamin A ist nicht wasserlöslich und der Körper braucht das Öl, um es aufnehmen zu können. Wenn man den Karottensalat nach einem Hauptgericht serviert, das viel Öl enthält, kann man das Sonnenblumenöl weglassen.
Carrot Salad
Grate three carrots per psersonving.
Add one tablespoon of sugar per psersonving, some lemon juice and a bit of sunflower oil.
Mix the salad well.
It'The result is a simple, healthy, colourful and cheap desserafter-dinner treat that all children will like.
A salad isn't really a dessert, no matter how hard we try to trick kids haha. But that's just a suggestion--dessert also fits grammatically.
Carrots are a good source of vitamin A. However, Vitamin A is not water soluble and t. The body needs thefats like those found in the sunflower oil to absorb it.
This is just what occurred to me. But yours is fine too.
If you serve carrot salad after a main course that contains a lot of oilis rich in fat, you don't need to add any sunflower oil.
My changes are a little subtle, I guess. Usually the distinction is between water-soluble and fat-soluble vitamins. That's why "fats" popped up in my previous suggestion. So I'm continuing that contrast. However, "contains a lot of fat" sounds bad for a recipe. "Rich in fat" sounds a little more healthy, if that makes sense. Slightly more positive connotations.
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Sounds like a good change from the usual cake, haha.
Carrot Salad
Grate three carrots per person.
Add one spoon of sugar per person, some lemon juice and a bit of sunflower oil.
Mix the salad well.
It's a simple, healthy, colourful and cheap dessert that all children will like.
Carrots are a good source of vitamin A. Vitamin A is not water soluble and the body needs the oil to absorb it.
If you serve carrot salad after a main course that contains a lot of oil, you don't need to add any sunflower oil.
Carrot Salad
Grate three carrots per person.
Add one spoon of sugar per person, some lemon juice and a bit of sunflower oil.
Mix the salad well.
It's a simple, healthy, colourful and cheap dessert that all children like.
Carrots are a good source of vitamin A. Vitamin A is not water soluble and the body needs the oil to absorb it.
If you serve carrot salad after a main course that contains a lot of oil, you don't need to add any sunflower oil.
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If you serve carrot salad after a main course that contains a lot of oil, you don't need to add any sunflower oil. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! If you serve carrot salad after a main course that My changes are a little subtle, I guess. Usually the distinction is between water-soluble and fat-soluble vitamins. That's why "fats" popped up in my previous suggestion. So I'm continuing that contrast. However, "contains a lot of fat" sounds bad for a recipe. "Rich in fat" sounds a little more healthy, if that makes sense. Slightly more positive connotations. |
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