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prisci

Nov. 10, 2022

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Candy

I love Candy so much is my favourite food. It gives so many things from Candy. I like gum bears chocolate and bon bon. Candy gives of so many partys. It gives also Candy than gifts and to holiday.

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I love Candy so much it is my favourite food.

The noun candy doesn’t need a capital letter. You also have to describe the noun - using it is.

Candy is gives of so manyn at partyies.

The candy cannot give- its not a person.

ItCandy is givesn also Candy than s gifts and to on holiday.s.

Just needed to word this differently

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Overall this is a really good paragraph- just needed to be worded differently

I love Ccandy so much, it's my favourite food.

It givesThere are so many thkingds from Cof candy.

I like gummy bears, chocolate, and bon bons.

Candy gives of so many partysLots of parties have candy.

It give's also Candy than gifts and to good to give candy instead of gifts on holidays.

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Good job!

I love Ccandy so much it is my favourite food.

It gives so many things from Cthere is a lot of types of candy.

I likMy favorites are gum bears chocolate and bon bon.

Candy gives of so many partys.makes parties fun

It gives also Candy than gifts and to you could also give it as a gift in holiday.s.

I love Ccandy so much it is my favourite food.

It gives so many thThere are many different kingds from Cof candy.

I like gummy bears, chocolate and bon bons.

Candy gives of so manyis set out at partys.

It gives also CandyAnd it is given out more than gifts and to during the holidays.

It gives so many things from Candy.


It gives so many thThere are many different kingds from Cof candy.

It gives so many things from Cthere is a lot of types of candy.

It givesThere are so many thkingds from Cof candy.

I like gum bears chocolate and bon bon.


I like gummy bears, chocolate and bon bons.

I likMy favorites are gum bears chocolate and bon bon.

I like gummy bears, chocolate, and bon bons.

Candy


I love Candy so much is my favourite food.


I love Ccandy so much it is my favourite food.

I love Ccandy so much it is my favourite food.

I love Ccandy so much, it's my favourite food.

I love Candy so much it is my favourite food.

The noun candy doesn’t need a capital letter. You also have to describe the noun - using it is.

Candy gives of so many partys.


Candy gives of so manyis set out at partys.

Candy gives of so many partys.makes parties fun

Candy gives of so many partysLots of parties have candy.

Candy is gives of so manyn at partyies.

The candy cannot give- its not a person.

It gives also Candy than gifts and to holiday.


It gives also CandyAnd it is given out more than gifts and to during the holidays.

It gives also Candy than gifts and to you could also give it as a gift in holiday.s.

It give's also Candy than gifts and to good to give candy instead of gifts on holidays.

ItCandy is givesn also Candy than s gifts and to on holiday.s.

Just needed to word this differently

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