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Can you trust ancestry DNA kits?

Few minutes ago, I listened to a podcast about that.

DNA, if I understood, is your genetics. It allows you to know who are your forebears.
But everybody share 99.9 percent of their genetics so it isn't efficient. You must take it with a pinch of salt.

Sometimes, when you sent your staple and you receive the response, you can be surprised by your origines.
Indeed, it's important to understand the difference between the ancestory and the ethnicity.
Your ancestory is your relatives, people who you know or knew.
Whereas your ethnicity is your "people". Persons you never knew and it often has a close bound with the geolocalisation where you live.
In the podcast, a man discovered and it blows his mind when he discovered that he wasn't just English and has almost no English genetics but rather Irish and Scottish origins.

I didn't understand everything in the podcast so I'm sorry if you don't understand everything too. It's normal because even if I understand all the words, I didn't understand all the meaning of the podcast.

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FA few minutes ago, I listened to a podcast about thatAncestry genetic kits.

DNA, if I understood, isdeoxyribonucleic acid, is a part of your genetics.

It allows you to know who are your forebears.The kit helps you find your family.

But everybody shares 99.9 percent% of their genetics, so it isn't efficient.

You must take ithe results with a pinch of salt. (carefully).

Sometimes, when you sentd your stample and you receive the responseults, you can be surprised by your origines.

Indeed, it's important to understand the difference between the ancestory and the ethnicity.

Your ancestory is your relatives, people who you know or knew.

Whereas your ethnicity is your "people".

Personsople that you never knew and i. It often has a close bound with the geolocalisation where you live.

In the podcast, a man discovered and it blows his mind when he discovered that he wasn't just English and has almost no English genetics but rather Irish and Scottish origins.

I didn't understand everything in the podcast so I'm sorry if you don't understand everything toohat I wrote.

It's normal because even if I understand all the words, I didn'on’t understand all the meaning of thea podcast.

Can you trust ancestry DNA kits?

FA few minutes ago, I listened to a podcast about that.

You might want to replace "that" with the subject, "DNA ancestry kits" to make it sound more fluid, however, it is grammatically correct.

DNA, if I understood, is your genetics.

It allows you to know who are your forebears.

But everybody shares 99.9 percent of their genetics, so it isn't efficient.

You might want to specify what isn't "efficient"

You must take it with a pinch of salt.

Sometimes, when you sent your staple and you receive the response, you can be surprised by your origines.

Indeed, it's important to understand the difference between the ancestory and the ethnicity.

Your ancestory is your relatives, people who you know or knew.

Whereas your ethnicity is your "people".

Personsople you never knew and it often has a close bound with the geolocalisation where you live.

In the podcast, a man discovered and it blows his mind when he discovered that he wasn't just English and has almost no English genetics but rather Irish and Scottish origins, and it blew his mind when he discovered it.

I didn't understand everything in the podcast so I'm sorry if you don't understand everything too.

It's normal because even if I understand all the words, I didn't understand all the meaning of the podcast.

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Overall, it's a great piece of writing. A few of the words are kind of complex and a bit harder to understand, but all the mistakes are very easy corrections. You did a great job!!! : )

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Solen

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Thanks a lot! I often write better texts but today, the podcast was pretty difficult and I wasn't very interested in!

Can you trust ancestry DNA kits?


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Few minutes ago, I listened to a podcast about that.


FA few minutes ago, I listened to a podcast about that.

You might want to replace "that" with the subject, "DNA ancestry kits" to make it sound more fluid, however, it is grammatically correct.

FA few minutes ago, I listened to a podcast about thatAncestry genetic kits.

DNA, if I understood, is your genetics.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

DNA, if I understood, isdeoxyribonucleic acid, is a part of your genetics.

It allows you to know who are your forebears.


It allows you to know who are your forebears.

It allows you to know who are your forebears.The kit helps you find your family.

But everybody share 99.9 percent of their genetics so it isn't efficient.


But everybody shares 99.9 percent of their genetics, so it isn't efficient.

You might want to specify what isn't "efficient"

But everybody shares 99.9 percent% of their genetics, so it isn't efficient.

You must take it with a pinch of salt.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You must take ithe results with a pinch of salt. (carefully).

Sometimes, when you sent your staple and you receive the response, you can be surprised by your origines.


Sometimes, when you sent your staple and you receive the response, you can be surprised by your origines.

Sometimes, when you sentd your stample and you receive the responseults, you can be surprised by your origines.

Indeed, it's important to understand the difference between the ancestory and the ethnicity.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Indeed, it's important to understand the difference between the ancestory and the ethnicity.

Your ancestory is your relatives, people who you know or knew.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Your ancestory is your relatives, people who you know or knew.

Whereas your ethnicity is your "people".


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Whereas your ethnicity is your "people".

Persons you never knew and it often has a close bound with the geolocalisation where you live.


Personsople you never knew and it often has a close bound with the geolocalisation where you live.

Personsople that you never knew and i. It often has a close bound with the geolocalisation where you live.

In the podcast, a man discovered and it blows his mind when he discovered that he wasn't just English and has almost no English genetics but rather Irish and Scottish origins.


In the podcast, a man discovered and it blows his mind when he discovered that he wasn't just English and has almost no English genetics but rather Irish and Scottish origins, and it blew his mind when he discovered it.

In the podcast, a man discovered and it blows his mind when he discovered that he wasn't just English and has almost no English genetics but rather Irish and Scottish origins.

I didn't understand everything in the podcast so I'm sorry if you don't understand everything too.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I didn't understand everything in the podcast so I'm sorry if you don't understand everything toohat I wrote.

It's normal because even if I understand all the words, I didn't understand all the meaning of the podcast.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's normal because even if I understand all the words, I didn'on’t understand all the meaning of thea podcast.

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