Oct. 5, 2025
Can you swim?
Yes I can. I had been going to swimming school for about six years when I was in elementary school, so I can swim with various way like butterfly even now. However, since I've been getting fat lately, I'm embarrassed to wear a swimsuit in public.
Can you swim?
Yes I can.
I had been goingWhen I was in elementary school, I went to a swimming school for about six years when I was in elementary school, so I can swim with various way, so even now, I can swim the different strokes like butterfly even now.
However, since I've been getting fat lately, I'm embarrassed to wear a swimsuit in public.
Oct. 5, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful correction.
In Japan, there are four ways to swim: crawl, backstroke, breaststroke, and butterfly.
Ever since I saw the movie Jaws, I can't swim in the ocean at all.
Can you swim?
Since you started this passage with “Yes I can”, I feel like it’d be better to say “Can I swim?”, but this technically works
I had been going to swimming school for about six years when I was in elementary school, so I can swim with various waymethods, like butterfly even nowmethod.
The end of your sentence is a bit confusing so I rephrased it
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Nice job! :3
Oct. 5, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful correction.
In Japan, there are four ways to swim: crawl, backstroke, breaststroke, and butterfly.
Ever since I saw the movie Jaws, I can't swim in the ocean at all.
I had been goingwent to a swimming school for about six years when I was in elementary school, s. So I can swim within various ways even today, like butterfly even now.
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Good text. Never be ashamed of your body!
Oct. 5, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful correction.
In Japan, there are four ways to swim: crawl, backstroke, breaststroke, and butterfly.
Ever since I saw the movie Jaws, I can't swim in the ocean at all.
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Can you swim? Can you swim? Since you started this passage with “Yes I can”, I feel like it’d be better to say “Can I swim?”, but this technically works This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yes I can. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had been going to swimming school for about six years when I was in elementary school, so I can swim with various way like butterfly even now. I I had been going to swimming school for about six years when I was in elementary school, so I can swim with various The end of your sentence is a bit confusing so I rephrased it
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However, since I've been getting fat lately, I'm embarrassed to wear a swimsuit in public. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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