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Nov. 27, 2021

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"La mort est mon métier" I think " La muerte es mi trabajo" wrote by Robert Merle is talking about nazis and jews during WW2. A young dutch man (12-13 years old) want to engage himself with nazis.
This is a real story about clichés and fear of jews. This young men is really afraid and he lives only to protect his family, his country. This is one of the man the most important in creation of concentration camps. The Book describes the horror, fear, submission and regrets.
It's a tell of the "otherside" and it's really cool.

This is a bit political so I Hope my texte is clear. I'm not with Hitler and I'm sorry if my word makes you feel like that.

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Can you read French ?

"La mort est mon métier" I think " La muerte es mi trabajo" wrote by Robert Merle is talking about nNazis and jJews during WW2.

A young dDutch man (12-13 years old) wants to engage himself with nNazis.

This is a real story about clichés and the fear of jJews.

This young mean is really afraiscared and he lives only to protect his family, his country.

'Man' is singular but 'Men' is plural

This is one of the manHe is the most important inman in the creation of concentration camps.

I see you directly translated the phrase 'C'est l'un des hommes le plus important' in French to English, but unfortunately this doesn't work.
Or, you can say 'He is one of the most important man iin the creatoni of concentration camps.'

The Bbook describes the horror, fear, submission and regrets.

Unless the name of this book is 'The Book'.

It's a tell of the "otherside" and it's really cool.

This is a bit political so I Hhope my texte is clear.

I'm not with Hitler and I'm sorry if my words makes you feel like that.

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Just be careful with the capitalization and the singular and plural form of nouns :)
Overall, great job!

Can you read French ?


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"La mort est mon métier" I think " La muerte es mi trabajo" wrote by Robert Merle is talking about nazis and jews during WW2.


"La mort est mon métier" I think " La muerte es mi trabajo" wrote by Robert Merle is talking about nNazis and jJews during WW2.

A young dutch man (12-13 years old) want to engage himself with nazis.


A young dDutch man (12-13 years old) wants to engage himself with nNazis.

This is a real story about clichés and fear of jews.


This is a real story about clichés and the fear of jJews.

This young men is really afraid and he lives only to protect his family, his country.


This young mean is really afraiscared and he lives only to protect his family, his country.

'Man' is singular but 'Men' is plural

This is one of the man the most important in creation of concentration camps.


This is one of the manHe is the most important inman in the creation of concentration camps.

I see you directly translated the phrase 'C'est l'un des hommes le plus important' in French to English, but unfortunately this doesn't work. Or, you can say 'He is one of the most important man iin the creatoni of concentration camps.'

The Book describes the horror, fear, submission and regrets.


The Bbook describes the horror, fear, submission and regrets.

Unless the name of this book is 'The Book'.

It's a tell of the "otherside" and it's really cool.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is a bit political so I Hope my texte is clear.


This is a bit political so I Hhope my texte is clear.

I'm not with Hitler and I'm sorry if my word makes you feel like that.


I'm not with Hitler and I'm sorry if my words makes you feel like that.

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