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666coolboy

April 26, 2022

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Can you fall in love with someone?

Can you fall in love with someone just by speaking over the phone and messages? We have met before but 30 years ago.

I think I can, but I know it is a short and fleeting love because the love is shallow if you don’t suffer troubles and obstacles with him. Maybe you will feel bad and take exception to my opinion. Although I know a person who falls in love won’t care other’s words, at least let me give you some kind suggestions and explanations:

1. You will pay more opportunity cost because your age is above 30. You won’t have a lot of time to stay with him in love imagination because you have a lot of stuff to do like protect your family, support your parents, etc. Although I want to follow the political correctness, we should take responsibility in this age. You should find a balance between reality and dream.

2. You can-not make sure the man is good or bad. I have seen many playboys hurt girls and never feel guilty, you can not believe a man you only see once. Maybe he is lying and flirting you. You should take care of yourself and alert this man.

3. You can find a nice partner in your life circle, not only in the internet. You will have more ways to know a man if he is in your life circle. Then it will decrease the probability that you will have been cheating.

The above are my suggestions and it is from a subjective perspective and is kind of one-side. Just pursue your true love if you really think he is that one. I hope my suggestions can help you and you can find your own happiness.

Thank you for reading and have a lovely day!


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Maybe he is lying and flirting with you.

3. You can find a nice partner in your life circle, not only ion the internet.

Just pursue your true love if you really think he is thate one.

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666coolboy

April 27, 2022

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Thank you for editing. Have a lovely day!

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April 27, 2022

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you're welcome

We have met before, but 30 years ago.

I think I can, but I know it is a short and fleeting love because the love is shallow if you don’t suffer troubles and obstacles with him.

Maybe you will feel bad and take exception to my opinion.

formally: You will
informal: you'll
Here, 'you will' matches the context.

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666coolboy

April 27, 2022

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Thank you for editing. Have a lovely day!

We have met before butonly 30 years ago.

Maybe you will feel bad and tmake an exception to my opinion.

Although I know a person who falls in love won’t care about another’s words, at least let me give you some kind suggestions and explanations:

You won’t have a lot of time to stay in love with him in love imagination because you have a lot of stuff to do, like protect your family, support your parents, etc.

Although I want to follow thbe politically correctness, we should take responsibility in this age.

You should find a balance between reality and dreamimagination.

2. You can-not make sure the man is good or bad.

I have seen many playboys hurt girls and never feel guilty, you can not believe a man you only see once.

3. You canshould find a nice partner in your life circlreal life, not only in the internet.

"in real life" is more natural than "in your life circle"

You will have more ways to know a man if he is in your life circlyou know him in real life.

Then it will decrease the probability that you will have beenbe cheatinged on.

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lots of grammar mistakes, but overall its good! it conveys the idea you want to explain, which is the most important part in my opinion.

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666coolboy

April 27, 2022

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Thank you for encouraging and editing. Have a lovely day!

We haved met before but 30 years ago.

Sounds more natural

I have seen many playboys hurt girls and never feel guilty, you can not believe a man youwhom you've seen only see once.

Maybe he is lying and flirting with you.

You flirt *with* someone

3. You can find a nice partner in your life circle, not only ion the internet.

The above are my suggestions and it is from a subjective perspective and is kind of one-sided.

Just pursue your true love if you really think he is thate one.

We usually say "the one" in romantic references

Can you fall in love with someone?

Can you fall in love with someone just by speaking over the phone and messages?

We have met before but 30 years ago.

This sentence is correct, but I don't understand what it means in context. Do you mean to say you met someone over the internet 30 years ago and fell in love with them?

I think I can, but I know it is a short and fleeting love because the love is shallow if you don’t suffer troubles and obstacles with him.

Maybe you will feel bad and take exception to my opinion.

Although I know a person who falls in love won’t care about other’s words, at least let me give you some kind suggestions and explanations:

1. You will pay more opportunity cost because your age is above 30.

You won’t have a lot of time to stay with him in love imagination because you have a lot of stuff to do like protect your family, support your parents, etc.

"love imagination" is an interesting phrase.

Although I want to follow the political correctness, we should take responsibility inat this age.

"in this age" means in the modern age, or in this time in the world. "At this age" means at the age of 30.

You should find a balance between reality and dream.

2. You can-not makbe sure whether the man is good or bad.

"cannot" or "can't" are both okay.

I have seen many playboys hurt girls and never feel guilty, you can not believe a man you only see once.

Maybe he is lying and flirting with you.

You should take care of yourself and alert this man.

"alert" isn't quite right here. "Alert" means to warn him that he is in danger. If he is very bad, you could alert the police so they know you need help.

3. You can find a nice partner in your lifesocial circle, not only in the internet.

You will have more ways to know a man if he is in your lifesocial circle.

Then it will decrease the probability that you will have been cheatinged.

Your grammar was correct, but it sounds like there was a mistake in meaning. "You have been cheating" means that you have been romantically involved with someone other than your partner. "You have been cheated" means someone has tricked you. "You have been cheated on" means your partner has been romantically involved with someone else.

The above are my suggestions and it is from a subjective perspective and is kind of one-sided.

Just pursue your true love if you really think he is thate one.

"The one" is a set phrase.

I hope my suggestions can help you and you can find your own happiness.

Thank you for reading and have a lovely day!

Feedback

Some great complex sentences, only minor corrections. Nicely done!

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666coolboy

April 27, 2022

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Thank you for encouraging and editing. Have a lovely day!

Can you fall in love with someone?


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Can you fall in love with someone just by speaking over the phone and messages?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We have met before but 30 years ago.


We have met before but 30 years ago.

This sentence is correct, but I don't understand what it means in context. Do you mean to say you met someone over the internet 30 years ago and fell in love with them?

We haved met before but 30 years ago.

Sounds more natural

We have met before butonly 30 years ago.

We have met before, but 30 years ago.

I think I can, but I know it is a short and fleeting love because the love is shallow if you don’t suffer troubles and obstacles with him.


I think I can, but I know it is a short and fleeting love because the love is shallow if you don’t suffer troubles and obstacles with him.

I think I can, but I know it is a short and fleeting love because the love is shallow if you don’t suffer troubles and obstacles with him.

Maybe you will feel bad and take exception to my opinion.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Maybe you will feel bad and tmake an exception to my opinion.

Maybe you will feel bad and take exception to my opinion.

formally: You will informal: you'll Here, 'you will' matches the context.

Although I know a person who falls in love won’t care other’s words, at least let me give you some kind suggestions and explanations:


Although I know a person who falls in love won’t care about other’s words, at least let me give you some kind suggestions and explanations:

Although I know a person who falls in love won’t care about another’s words, at least let me give you some kind suggestions and explanations:

1. You will pay more opportunity cost because your age is above 30.


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You won’t have a lot of time to stay with him in love imagination because you have a lot of stuff to do like protect your family, support your parents, etc.


You won’t have a lot of time to stay with him in love imagination because you have a lot of stuff to do like protect your family, support your parents, etc.

"love imagination" is an interesting phrase.

You won’t have a lot of time to stay in love with him in love imagination because you have a lot of stuff to do, like protect your family, support your parents, etc.

Although I want to follow the political correctness, we should take responsibility in this age.


Although I want to follow the political correctness, we should take responsibility inat this age.

"in this age" means in the modern age, or in this time in the world. "At this age" means at the age of 30.

Although I want to follow thbe politically correctness, we should take responsibility in this age.

You should find a balance between reality and dream.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You should find a balance between reality and dreamimagination.

2. You can-not make sure the man is good or bad.


2. You can-not makbe sure whether the man is good or bad.

"cannot" or "can't" are both okay.

2. You can-not make sure the man is good or bad.

I have seen many playboys hurt girls and never feel guilty, you can not believe a man you only see once.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have seen many playboys hurt girls and never feel guilty, you can not believe a man youwhom you've seen only see once.

I have seen many playboys hurt girls and never feel guilty, you can not believe a man you only see once.

Maybe he is lying and flirting you.


Maybe he is lying and flirting with you.

Maybe he is lying and flirting with you.

You flirt *with* someone

Maybe he is lying and flirting with you.

You should take care of yourself and alert this man.


You should take care of yourself and alert this man.

"alert" isn't quite right here. "Alert" means to warn him that he is in danger. If he is very bad, you could alert the police so they know you need help.

3. You can find a nice partner in your life circle, not only in the internet.


3. You can find a nice partner in your lifesocial circle, not only in the internet.

3. You can find a nice partner in your life circle, not only ion the internet.

3. You canshould find a nice partner in your life circlreal life, not only in the internet.

"in real life" is more natural than "in your life circle"

3. You can find a nice partner in your life circle, not only ion the internet.

You will have more ways to know a man if he is in your life circle.


You will have more ways to know a man if he is in your lifesocial circle.

You will have more ways to know a man if he is in your life circlyou know him in real life.

Then it will decrease the probability that you will have been cheating.


Then it will decrease the probability that you will have been cheatinged.

Your grammar was correct, but it sounds like there was a mistake in meaning. "You have been cheating" means that you have been romantically involved with someone other than your partner. "You have been cheated" means someone has tricked you. "You have been cheated on" means your partner has been romantically involved with someone else.

Then it will decrease the probability that you will have beenbe cheatinged on.

The above are my suggestions and it is from a subjective perspective and is kind of one-side.


The above are my suggestions and it is from a subjective perspective and is kind of one-sided.

The above are my suggestions and it is from a subjective perspective and is kind of one-sided.

Just pursue your true love if you really think he is that one.


Just pursue your true love if you really think he is thate one.

"The one" is a set phrase.

Just pursue your true love if you really think he is thate one.

We usually say "the one" in romantic references

Just pursue your true love if you really think he is thate one.

I hope my suggestions can help you and you can find your own happiness.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you for reading and have a lovely day!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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