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yusuf

Jan. 28, 2021

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Can you cheek my mistakes please!

Maria is nostalgic. She stands between Joe and The past, And bridge him to it. He Asked Maria to sing a song and she chose ''Marble Halls''. The song must made Joe Remember the old days when she was his nanny, which were like marble halls comparing to his present. He said '' there is no time like the long ago''. The song may be also made him realize the present is not the way he hoped things would be.

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She stands between Joe and Tthe past, Andat a bridge himthat can bring her closer to ithim.

I understand you're referring to the past/past events, but it doesn't need to be capitalized.

He Aasked Maria to sing a song and she chose, ''Marble Halls''.

The song must have made Joe Rremember the old days when she was his nanny, which were like comparing marble halls comparing to his present.

He said, '' there is no time like the long agopast''.

The song may bhave also made him realize that the present is not the way he hoped things would be.

Can you cheek my mistakes please!


Maria is nostalgic.


She stands between Joe and The past, And bridge him to it.


She stands between Joe and Tthe past, Andat a bridge himthat can bring her closer to ithim.

I understand you're referring to the past/past events, but it doesn't need to be capitalized.

He Asked Maria to sing a song and she chose ''Marble Halls''.


He Aasked Maria to sing a song and she chose, ''Marble Halls''.

The song must made Joe Remember the old days when she was his nanny, which were like marble halls comparing to his present.


The song must have made Joe Rremember the old days when she was his nanny, which were like comparing marble halls comparing to his present.

He said '' there is no time like the long ago''.


He said, '' there is no time like the long agopast''.

The song may be also made him realize the present is not the way he hoped things would be.


The song may bhave also made him realize that the present is not the way he hoped things would be.

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