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kaguyahime

July 20, 2021

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Can Someone Invent This Machine?

Our everyday live has became more convenient and easier compare to 100 years ago because technology was rapid progress.

Now , what I really want is an automatic cooking machine. It is not like only heat dishes or bake breads looks like a microwave oven or a gas oven. I am saying a machine, which can cuts vegetables, fish, meat and add an appropriate seasoning for completing a perfect dish. We only need to insert all ingredients, which a dish require and turn on the machine.

If such a terrific ideal machine is invented, tons of housewives in the world will be mad with joy. Because cooking is one of a biggest house chore after most women get married. While the machine cooking automatically, housewives can enjoy their own free time and just wait for finishing cooking.

On the other hand, a sad thing is that restaurants that don't serve delicious meals to customers would need to be close down their business. It is no demand anymore.

I hope that such a great cooking machine show up in our society before I will be married.

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Can Someone Invent This Machine?

Our everyday lives hasve becaome more convenient and easier compared to 100 years ago because technology wasof rapid progress in technology.

Now , what I really want is an automatic cooking machine.

It is not likedoesn't only heat dishes or bake breads looks like a microwave oven or a gas oven.

I am saying a machine, which that can cuts vegetables, fish, meat and add an appropriate seasoning for completing a perfect dish.

We only need to insert all the ingredients, which that a dish requires and turn on the machine.

If such a terrific, ideal machine is invented, tons of housewives in the world will be mad with joy.

Because cooking is one of athe biggest house chores after most women get married.

"most important," "most time-consuming," or "most difficult" could work instead of "biggest"

While the machine is cooking automatically, housewives can enjoy their own free time and just wait for it to finishing cooking.

On the other hand, a sad thing is that restaurants that don't serve delicious meals to customers would need to be close down their businesses.

ItThere is no demand anymore.

I hope that such a great cooking machine will show up in our society before I will beget married.

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kaguyahime

July 20, 2021

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Thank you so much for your correction. Have a nice day!!

Can Someone Invent This Machine?


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Our everyday live has became more convenient and easier compare to 100 years ago because technology was rapid progress.


Our everyday lives hasve becaome more convenient and easier compared to 100 years ago because technology wasof rapid progress in technology.

Now , what I really want is an automatic cooking machine.


Now , what I really want is an automatic cooking machine.

It is not like only heat dishes or bake breads looks like a microwave oven or a gas oven.


It is not likedoesn't only heat dishes or bake breads looks like a microwave oven or a gas oven.

I am saying a machine, which can cuts vegetables, fish, meat and add an appropriate seasoning for completing a perfect dish.


I am saying a machine, which that can cuts vegetables, fish, meat and add an appropriate seasoning for completing a perfect dish.

We only need to insert all ingredients, which a dish require and turn on the machine.


We only need to insert all the ingredients, which that a dish requires and turn on the machine.

If such a terrific ideal machine is invented, tons of housewives in the world will be mad with joy.


If such a terrific, ideal machine is invented, tons of housewives in the world will be mad with joy.

Because cooking is one of a biggest house chore after most women get married.


Because cooking is one of athe biggest house chores after most women get married.

"most important," "most time-consuming," or "most difficult" could work instead of "biggest"

While the machine cooking automatically, housewives can enjoy their own free time and just wait for finishing cooking.


While the machine is cooking automatically, housewives can enjoy their own free time and just wait for it to finishing cooking.

On the other hand, a sad thing is that restaurants that don't serve delicious meals to customers would need to be close down their business.


On the other hand, a sad thing is that restaurants that don't serve delicious meals to customers would need to be close down their businesses.

It is no demand anymore.


ItThere is no demand anymore.

I hope that such a great cooking machine show up in our society before I will be married.


I hope that such a great cooking machine will show up in our society before I will beget married.

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