June 28, 2022
Can money buy happiness?
I've heard the statements that happiness cannot be bought with money. But they were stated mostly by people who already achieved something and get enough money to afford comfortable life conditions.
There is a special model that was made by American psychologist. It names Maslow's hierarchy. It states that people have needs during their life and those needs have different levels. Firstly people need to meet basic needs like food and sleep. Then comes safety needs, then needs of love and belonging and so on. What is important, if you're hungry you don't care about love and safety - you just need to satisfy hunger.
I decided to describe that model in order to explain what happens in minds of the people that I mentioned in first paragraph. They've successfully satisfied their basic and middle needs of that hierarchy and as a result they strive to achieve more and they see happiness in those higher things. They don't care about money and financial safety anymore - they want to get more.
Most of the people struggle to get enough money and meet all their dreams and needs. That's why they see happiness in getting more money. In other words, from their point of view, money indeed can buy happiness.
Buy if you're already loaded enough or you somehow managed to refuse material values (like Buddhist monks do), the statement is rather wrong.
It names is called the 'Maslow's hierarchy'.
Then comes safety needs, and then the needs of love and belonging and so on.
Most of the people struggle to get enough money and meet all their dreams and needs.
Buyt if you're already loaded enough or you somehow managed to refuse material values (like Buddhist monks do), the statement is rather wrong.
Can money buy happiness?
I've heard the statements that happiness cannot be bought with money.
But they were stated mostly said by people who already achieved something and get enough money to afford a comfortable life conditions.
You could also say, But the people who said this often already achieved something and get enough money to afford a comfortable life.
There is a special model that was made by American psychologist.
It namess called Maslow's hierarchy.
I would combine this with the previous sentence like this. There is a special model that was made by American psychologist called Maslow's hierarchy.
It states that people have needs during their life and those needs have different levels.
Firstly people need to meet basic needs like food and sleep.
Then comes safety needs, then needs of love and belonging and so on.
What is important, if you're hungry you don't care about love and safety - you just need to satisfy your hunger.
Your sentence was correct, I just thought that adding "your" sounds a little better.
I decided to describe that model in order to explain what happens in minds of the people that I mentioned in first paragraph.
They've successfully satisfied their basic and middle needs of that hierarchy and as a result they strive to achieve more and they see happiness in those higher things.
They don't care about money and financial safety anymore - they want to get more.
Most of the people struggle to get enough money and meet all their dreams and needs.
That's why they see happiness in getting more money.
In other words, from their point of view, money indeed can buy happiness.
Buyt if you're already loaded enough or you somehow managed to refuse material values (like Buddhist monks do), the statement is rather wrong.
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excellent work.
June 28, 2022
Thx for you time and attention. I will take your remarks into account.
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Can money buy happiness? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I've heard the statements that happiness cannot be bought with money. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But they were stated mostly by people who already achieved something and get enough money to afford comfortable life conditions. But they were You could also say, But the people who said this often already achieved something and get enough money to afford a comfortable life. |
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There is a special model that was made by American psychologist. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It names Maslow's hierarchy. It I would combine this with the previous sentence like this. There is a special model that was made by American psychologist called Maslow's hierarchy. It |
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It states that people have needs during their life and those needs have different levels. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Firstly people need to meet basic needs like food and sleep. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then comes safety needs, then needs of love and belonging and so on. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Then comes safety needs |
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What is important, if you're hungry you don't care about love and safety - you just need to satisfy hunger. What is important, if you're hungry you don't care about love and safety - you just need to satisfy your hunger. Your sentence was correct, I just thought that adding "your" sounds a little better. |
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I decided to describe that model in order to explain what happens in minds of the people that I mentioned in first paragraph. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They've successfully satisfied their basic and middle needs of that hierarchy and as a result they strive to achieve more and they see happiness in those higher things. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They don't care about money and financial safety anymore - they want to get more. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Most of the people struggle to get enough money and meet all their dreams and needs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Most |
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In other words, from their point of view, money indeed can buy happiness. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Buy if you're already loaded enough or you somehow managed to refuse material values (like Buddhist monks do), the statement is rather wrong. Bu Bu |
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