Can anyone help review my writing?

lethanhhang

Oct. 4, 2022

Can anyone help review my writing?

IELTS speaking part 1 questions:

Do you work or study? (Do you work or are you a student?)

I am currently working as a bartender for a juice shop owned by my relatives. But this is just a temporary job to pay the bills. I’m studying an online English course that aims at getting a 7.5 in IELTS test. This is because want to be an English teacher, and most language institutions require the applicants to have a 7.5 IELTS qualification.

How do you spend your work day?

I usually start off my day with going to the market near my house and buying buy fresh products for the day such as fruits to stock the shop. Then, I spend around one hour cleaning the shop and preparing the materials. After that, I make drinks for customers, and before going off work, I clean all the equipment.

Is it better to work in the morning or in the afternoon?

Personally, I find that I’m more productive in the afternoon. My energy is usually the lowest around 2-3 hours after I just wake up. I think at that time my brain has trouble functioning properly. So for me, I would perform better during the afternoon.

What do you do to improve your productivity?

I feel that a short nap really boosts my energy and productivity. Whenever I feel tired and sluggish, I just take a 15-minute sleep, and then I can work efficiently again. If I do not have enough time, I close my eyes and try to think about nothing for about five minutes. This can revitalize my brain too.

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IELTS speaking part 1 questions:

Do you work or study?

(Do you work or are you a student? )

I am currently working as a bartender for a juice shop owned by my relatives.

But this is just a temporary job to pay the bills.

This is because wanting to be an English teacher, and most language institutions require the applicants to have a 7.5 IELTS qualification.

How do you spend your work day?

I usually start off my day with going to the market near my house and buying ~~buy~~ fresh products for the day such as fruits to stock the shop.

Then, I spend around one hour cleaning the shop and preparing the materials.

After that, I make drinks for customers, and before going off work, I clean all the equipment.

Is it better to work in the morning or in the afternoon?

Personally, I find that I’m more productive in the afternoon.

My energy is usually the lowest around 2-3 hours after I just wake up.

I think at that time my brain has trouble functioning properly.

So for me, I would perform better during the afternoon.

What do you do to improve your productivity?

I feel that a short nap really boosts my energy and productivity.

Whenever I feel tired and sluggish, I just take a 15-minute sleep(nap), and then I can work efficiently again.

If I do not have enough time, I close my eyes and try to think about nothing for about five minutes.