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Do you enjoy camping? Do you prefer sleeping in a tent, under the stars or in a mobile home? Intermediate: If you have been camping, as a child or an adult, tell us about one memorable experience you had while camping.
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I really like the idea of camping somewhere but I usually don't do it.
The only time I remember doing it was when I was a kid and I wanted to go camping but my mom couldn't take me out and she thought it was dangerous so we made a tent inside the house, in the living room and made a tea party.

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Camping

I really like the idea of camping somewhere but I usually don't do it.

The only time I remember doing it/camping was when I was a kid and I wanted to go camping but my mom couldn't take me out and she thought it was dangerous so we made a tent inside the house, in the living room and mhade/hosted a tea party.

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Camping

The only time I remember doing it was when I was a kid and I wanted to go camping but. However my mom couldn't take me out and she thought it was dangerous so. Instead we made a tent inside the house, in the living room and mhade a tea party.

This is a well written sentence but it is a little too long -- I made it into three sentences instead.

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Camping

I really like the idea of camping somewhere but I usually don't do it.

The only time I remember doing it was when I was a kid and. I wanted to go camping but my mom cwouldn't take me out andbecause she thought it was dangerous, so we made a tent inside the house, in the living room and mhade a tea party.

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I really like the idea of camping somewhere but I usually don't do it.

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The only time I remember doing it was when I was a kid and I wanted to go camping but my mom couldn't take me out and she thought it was dangerous so we made a tent inside the house, in the living room and made a tea party.

The only time I remember doing it was when I was a kid and. I wanted to go camping but my mom cwouldn't take me out andbecause she thought it was dangerous, so we made a tent inside the house, in the living room and mhade a tea party.

The only time I remember doing it was when I was a kid and I wanted to go camping but. However my mom couldn't take me out and she thought it was dangerous so. Instead we made a tent inside the house, in the living room and mhade a tea party.

This is a well written sentence but it is a little too long -- I made it into three sentences instead.

The only time I remember doing it/camping was when I was a kid and I wanted to go camping but my mom couldn't take me out and she thought it was dangerous so we made a tent inside the house, in the living room and mhade/hosted a tea party.

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