Nov. 13, 2024
Callous Figure
Elon Musk, the richest man in the world. He has produced a lot of amazing, unprecedented products in a wide range of industries, which including Tesla Electric Vehicles, rockets from SpaceX, Nerulink Star Chain, and implanting brain-computer-interface chips. However, he has been argued as a callous figure. His workers are discouraged from joining Union organizations and he is also recognized as inclined to the interest of China. In my mind, he is amazing and partially callous.
A Callous Figure
Elon Musk, is the richest man in the world.
He has produced a lot of amazing, unprecedented products in a wide range of industries, which including Tesla Eelectric Vvehicles, rockets forom SpaceX, Nerualink, Star Chain, and has implantinged brain-computer-interface chips.
However, he has been argualso been regarded as a callous figure.
MY GUESS: His workers are discouraged from joining Uunion organizations and he is also recognized as inclined to the interest of anti-China.ese
NOTE: I could not understand "to inclined to the interest of China." Perhaps you mean "pro-Chinese" or "anti-Chinese."
In my mind, he is both amazing and partially callous.
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Elon Musk is a loose cannon. I disagree with his politics, but he is a scientific genius.
Nov. 18, 2024
Thank you for your corrections! In my writing, I thought Elon was pro-China. In addition, I think Elon might run for president if he were born in America.
Elon Musk, the richest man in the world.,
The intro sentence is a bit short, try to merge it with the next one.
He has produced a lot of amazing, unprecedented products in a wide range of industries, which including Tesla Electric Vehicles, rockets from SpaceX, Nerulink Star Chain, and implanting brain-computer-interface chips.
However, he has been argucriticized as a callous figure.
"has been argued" is understandable, but it is the wrong expression to use.
His workers are discouraged from joining Union organizations and he is also recognized as inclined to the interest of China.
"to the interest of" is redundant, if someone is inclined for something, it's implied that they're interested in said thing.
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Not bad overall, very understandable with minimal issues.
Nov. 14, 2024
Thank you very much for your corrections!
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Elon Musk, the richest man in the world. Elon Musk, the richest man in the world The intro sentence is a bit short, try to merge it with the next one. Elon Musk |
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He has produced a lot of amazing, unprecedented products in a wide range of industries, which including Tesla Electric Vehicles, rockets from SpaceX, Nerulink Star Chain, and implanting brain-computer-interface chips.
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However, he has been argued as a callous figure. However, he has been "has been argued" is understandable, but it is the wrong expression to use. However, he has |
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His workers are discouraged from joining Union organizations and he is also recognized as inclined to the interest of China. His workers are discouraged from joining Union organizations and he is also recognized as inclined to "to the interest of" is redundant, if someone is inclined for something, it's implied that they're interested in said thing. MY GUESS: His workers are discouraged from joining NOTE: I could not understand "to inclined to the interest of China." Perhaps you mean "pro-Chinese" or "anti-Chinese." |
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In my mind, he is amazing and partially callous. In my mind, he is both amazing and |
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