Dec. 20, 2021
Calling With My Brother
I don't have friends to call regularly.
Instead, I try to talk with my brother on the phone quite often.
Because he lives too far from my home, so we are not able to meet twice a year.
On the phone, we usually talk about many topics like his new girlfriend, each city's weather and funny YouTubes.
The phone call makes me feel happy and comfortable.
Calling My Brother / Calls With My Brother
I don't have friends to call regularly.
Instead, I try to talk with my brother on the phone quite oftenoften. / Instead, I try to talk with my brother on the phone regularly.
Because he lives too far from my home, we are not able to meet twice a year. / He lives too far from my home, so we are not able to meet twice a year.
On the phone, we usually talk about many topics like his new girlfriend, each city's weather and funny YouTube videos.
The phone call makes me feel happy and comfortable.
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Siblings are great friends. Nice work! :)
Dec. 21, 2021
Thank you very much!
Calling My Brother/Talking on the Phone With My Brother
Because he lives too far from my home, so we are not able to meet twice a year.
On the phone, we usually talk about many topics like his new girlfriend, each city's weather and funny YouTube videos.
The pPhone calls makes me feel happy and comfortable.
I corrected it this way assuming that phone calls in general make you feel this way.
Dec. 21, 2021
Thank you!
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Calling With My Brother Calling My Brother/Talking on the Phone With My Brother Calling My Brother / Calls With My Brother |
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I don't have friends to call regularly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Instead, I try to talk with my brother on the phone quite often. Instead, I try to talk with my brother on the phone |
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Because he lives too far from my home, so we are not able to meet twice a year. Because he lives too far from my home, Because he lives too far from my home, we are not able to meet twice a year. / He lives too far from my home, so we are not able to meet twice a year. |
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On the phone, we usually talk about many topics like his new girlfriend, each city's weather and funny YouTubes. On the phone, we usually talk about many topics like his new girlfriend, each city's weather and funny YouTube videos. On the phone, we usually talk about many topics like his new girlfriend, each city's weather and funny YouTube videos. |
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The phone call makes me feel happy and comfortable.
I corrected it this way assuming that phone calls in general make you feel this way. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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