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What do you mean by mutants?

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Although my friends didn’t come because of their hectic schedules, I had mythe best birthday ever.

The last one in that bakery was also the first time I eat the doughnut.

I'm not really sure what this means.

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Cakes are is one of my most-likedfavourite foods.

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"Dislike" seems more fitting here.

I’ve just eaten a cake infrom the fridge.

But it brings me a lot of memories since I was a kifrom my childhood.

There was one time, and I really like this one.memory.

Every time my family gowent to the supermarket, I wanted to eat that cake when I feelt too tired to move.

You should use the past tense as it a memory of your childhood.

But not onlySince thaten, I’ve tried many cakes, and also breads and also biscuits.

In my opinion, a loaf of bread is only delicious when combined with manyother foods: salad, grilled meat with ketchup or chilli sauce.

I’ve tried to add some mutants but it’s kind of spicy, more than I expected, so I removed it.

AboutWith the biscuits, sometimes my parents received them from my uncle.

Because they don’t like it, exactly and they don’t want to eat it too much so mostly I and, my sister and I always try to finish it before it is goes out of date.

Now I’m a bit scared a bit.

I stopped eating biscuits for somea few days.

At that time, I found athe bakery where my mother bought a birthday cake for me.

“BI think that birthday iss are not fun anymore as I grew up”, I’ve thought soone grows up.

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That cake hadwas my favourite taste with another twinklingand was decorationed.

Not only thatwas it a chocolate birthday cake, but there was a mini firework display and a birthday hat also made a day that I cannot forget now. It was an unforgettable day.

TIt was the last one in that bakery and it was also the first time I eat thee a doughnut.

It iwasn’t the best cake, but it helped me to make mefeel happy that day at school.

Need to use the past tense.

Cakes are one of my most-likedfavourite type of foods.

The sweetness and softness make me unable to hate it.s it irresistible.