Aug. 24, 2023
Caesar and Qin Shihuang
Caesar here stands the famous and renowned Dictator Caesar who was born in 100 BC and died in 44 BC. I believe every person after receiving elementary education knows him in Western countries.
Just about 150 years ahead of Caesar, Qing Shihuang also created a powerful empire in China. He has been considered as the first emperor who unified China, so everyone in my country who can speak Chinese knows him. Qin, established a principle of dynastic succession in China untill now in 2023. I am inclined to this idea and very sadly to see this system has been strethened asisted by the cut edge technology.
Caesar and Qin Shihuang
Caesar hHere stands the famous and renowned Ddictator, Caesar, who was born in 100 BC and died in 44 BC.
I believe every person after receivinganyone with an elementary education knows of him in Western countries.
Just about 150 years ahead of Caesar, Qing Shihuang also created a powerful empire in China.
He has been considered as the first emperor whto unifiedy China, so everyone in my country who can speaks Chinese knows him.
Qin, established a principle of dynastic succession in China untill now inlasting until 2023.
Just a side note, didn't the last dynasty end in the early 1900s?
I am inclineddrawn to this idea and am very sadly to see that this system has been strethened asismade obsoleted by the cut cutting-edge technology.
I'm not exactly sure what you're conveying here. It seems like you support this idea; therefore, you're sad that it's gone. So, "strengthened" and "assisted" don't make sense here.
Aug. 24, 2023
Qin, established a principle of dynastic succession in China untill now inlasting until 2023.
It is really quite easy to confuse people. "Qin" was the first dynasty that was established in 221 BC, while "Qing" was the last that ended in the early 1900s.
Aug. 25, 2023
I am inclineddrawn to this idea and am very sadly to see that this system has been strethened asismade obsoleted by the cut cutting-edge technology.
I wanted to express that this system has not changed, and assisted by the digital cutting-edge technology.
Aug. 25, 2023
Thank you for your corrections! :-)
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Caesar here stands the famous and renowned Dictator Caesar who was born in 100 BC and died in 44 BC.
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I believe every person after receiving elementary education knows him in Western countries. I believe |
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Just about 150 years ahead of Caesar, Qing Shihuang also created a powerful empire in China. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He has been considered as the first emperor who unified China, so everyone in my country who can speak Chinese knows him. He has been considered as the first emperor |
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Even though we are now in 2023, I am inclined to the idea that after Qin, the ruling system of China has never been changed. |
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Qin, established a principle of dynastic succession in China untill now in 2023. Qin Just a side note, didn't the last dynasty end in the early 1900s? |
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I am inclined to this idea and very sadly to see this system has been strethened asisted by the cut edge technology. I am I'm not exactly sure what you're conveying here. It seems like you support this idea; therefore, you're sad that it's gone. So, "strengthened" and "assisted" don't make sense here. |
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